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 Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 9:09 pm
Hello~! just needing critisisim on the following [A] {I must say, I'm just writting here my observations on the female body, like, not all females have the little space in between space, but only figure-obssessed girls}  {Using the pose in the previous thing.... I just need to know on the background and her....}
[C]{Created her today, took me about 20 mins, and I want opinion on overall look... It was such a fast thing... ;_;}
[D]{On coloring. Though, I don't know how to color armors and such... Oh, and I like her hair (the biiiiiig boobed one's)... }
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 11:29 pm
A draw over was easier.  I told you when you posted this before: that dress stretches over her boobs. Over. Even the tightest fitting fabric would only stretch over the boobs more. She is still missing the elbow from her other hand. I drew it in very poorly, but I also have a paper to write. Hope this will help a little. Over all, very good pics.
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Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 4:43 am
Unpolished A draw over was easier. I told you when you posted this before: that dress stretches over her boobs. Over. Even the tightest fitting fabric would only stretch over the boobs more. She is still missing the elbow from her other hand. I drew it in very poorly, but I also have a paper to write. Hope this will help a little. Over all, very good pics. I just didn't know how to change it... gonk sweatdrop but I remember. sweatdrop 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 4:49 am
It's good that you are studying anatomy. That helps a lot!
I do have a few points to bring up....
None of the breasts seem to hang quite right. They all sort of look pushed up and unnatural (and uncomfortable!).
In the last one, I don't quite understand what is going on with the kid's arm. Is it in a sling or something?
Overall, good job! You seem really good at drawing knees too. smile The background on the second piece is very interesting. Is it part of a story?
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Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 6:39 am
[Athena] It's good that you are studying anatomy. That helps a lot! I do have a few points to bring up.... None of the breasts seem to hang quite right. They all sort of look pushed up and unnatural (and uncomfortable!). In the last one, I don't quite understand what is going on with the kid's arm. Is it in a sling or something? Overall, good job! You seem really good at drawing knees too. smile The background on the second piece is very interesting. Is it part of a story?
I love drawing knees... they are my favorite part of the female body besides the belly. heart
And in the second one... yes, it's a story. more like a splash page of a story I'm developing in my mind, actually.... She's... an elf, elfs live on high places, this case, high trees. sweatdrop xp
thank you for the critisism... it's truly appreciated.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:55 pm
RainyAkuma Unpolished A draw over was easier. I told you when you posted this before: that dress stretches over her boobs. Over. Even the tightest fitting fabric would only stretch over the boobs more. She is still missing the elbow from her other hand. I drew it in very poorly, but I also have a paper to write. Hope this will help a little. Over all, very good pics. I just didn't know how to change it... gonk sweatdrop but I remember. sweatdrop 3nodding if you shade stretchier shadows over the cloth, you probably will get the effect to some extent, just add another layer ^^ it could be that her arm is keeping the loose material up too though razz
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 1:04 am
Take a moment to look over this tutorial on center of gravity (see the section on "Balance"). Putting your character(s) in a scene can help with positioning and keeping things in perspective, but when your characters are not in a scene, you should be able to maintain the same quality of perspective and positioning (in terms of feet-to-head positioning, positions of characters in relation to each other, etc).
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:09 pm
Draw-overs are easier, if 'ya don't mind. =D I have something positive to say first, though.
I like her feet.
It sounds weird, yeah, but'cha don't usually see that kinda detail on toes... anyway.
 EDIT
1. "Pretty disproportionate" should be "a little" because for some dumb reason I measured from the shoulder to the crotch instead of chin to crotch. neutral
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 1:38 pm
sybex Shark Draw-overs are easier, if 'ya don't mind. =D I have something positive to say first, though.
I like her feet.
It sounds weird, yeah, but'cha don't usually see that kinda detail on toes... anyway.
I disagree with your proportioning info completely. *There is one heads distance between the bottom of the chin and the n****e line (which this drawing has). *The distance between the n****e line and the crotch is slightly too short. So I'll agree with you a little bit there. *Upper body is shorter than lower body (which this drawing has). Have you ever met someone that has an upper body = to their lower body? It is super scary looking. *Thighs are longer than calves (which this drawing has). All and all, this proportioning is pretty accurate. It could be better, but the measurements are pretty accurate to a real person.
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:02 pm
Unpolished I disagree with your proportioning info completely. *There is one heads distance between the bottom of the chin and the n****e line (which this drawing has). *The distance between the n****e line and the crotch is slightly too short. So I'll agree with you a little bit there. *Upper body is shorter than lower body (which this drawing has). Have you ever met someone that has an upper body = to their lower body? It is super scary looking. *Thighs are longer than calves (which this drawing has). All and all, this proportioning is pretty accurate. It could be better, but the measurements are pretty accurate to a real person.
-I was actually talking about from the neck, not chin-n****e length, but... there is a bit more than one head's distance there. A bit. The chin to n****e actually does look correct with the rest of the body, so it might be the head itself.
-I think we've got different definitions of "lower body" and "upper body" here. From the chin to the crotch and the crotch to the ankles should both be about three heads long, the lower body being just a hair longer. Example. (I don't know where that comes from 'sides Google, but anyway.) In the OP's drawing, the lower body is noticeably longer, though not extremely so.
But... I started at the shoulder in the draw-over didn't I? That's probably why I said it was so disproportionate. It's still a tad short, but not greatly. Sorry 'bout that, you're right. xP
-The thighs are indeed longer than calves, but not so much so. The length on the whole is correct, though... placement of the knees, maybe?
I'm not saying everything is grossly out of proportion, just... a tad off.
Heads/revised draw-over:
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