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First time shading in a LOOOOOONG time

MaiSake

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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 9:56 pm

It urks me that it's on lined paper, but I wasn't planning on it turning out half as decent as I wished it would, I just felt I haven't shaded anything in, in a very (x100) long while.

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Critiques and pointers are very encouraged! ^_^

Thank you.

Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:56 am

I say great job the only thing is your hair seems a lil off. all porportions look good. the tail seems big but thats mostly watever Yep your still good at shading

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LadyAxeFace

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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 1:22 pm

Heh, I think it's good. The only thing I'd suggest to improve it is to give it more contrast.

Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 4:16 pm

I'd like to help more but the lines are distracting me x.x Sorry, use printer or sketch paper!

Shizzle Bam Boom-

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Sie Shee

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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 5:55 am

its very nice work exclaim

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:20 am

^_^ Thank you all for the comments and help. And yeah, haha, I'm looking to buy a sketch pad and pencil set soon, so hopfeullly the lines and contrast issue will disapear. sweatdrop

As for the hair- I think I see what you mean, I think I made to.. out there? Like it should've ended a little more closer to the face and the fuzziness below the longer part should be.. smaller. Hard to explain haha. Thanks for pointing that out though. ^_^

MaiSake

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Shanexwasxhere

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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 11:07 am

I think you did a very good job, except Shikyo Kumori is sorta right. The hair needs a little improving. But overall it's a wonderful drawing. heart

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 11:18 am

It's pretty good. All I can say is to make the arms a tad bit longer and more contrast in the shading.

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