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Captain Sporkie Pie

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:11 pm


As i'm new, I should show this guild what I can do, (And what I really can't sweatdrop ).
Please don't be too harsh, I take things to heart sweatdrop And constructive critisisum only please.

I know the picture is very big, but my scanner likes to make my drawings grow in size gonk
Also, I don't plan on coloring it, as my scanner makes the colours look funny eek (My scanner really is evil. Can't wait for my tablet!)

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d40/meepypeepy/My Drawings/SweetRinSohma2.png

This is an older style I used, and i'm changing to make it less simple, but it's still my own work. I know it is very simple sweatdrop

Thank you
PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:20 pm


well done, it reminds me of Oban star racers i love that show sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:28 pm


Really? Groovy! I've heard about that from Neo Magazeen(sp).
It looks like a good show!
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 1:01 pm


Cute! you use a cute simplified/chibi style. I don't think that you have to change your style if you continue with this one your art could develop into very cute SD/chibi art. If you want to work on making your art less simplified you might want to define the forhead and mouth in the out line of the face. It also looks like the peak of the hair at the top of the head might be a little too close to the front of the head.

arichan99


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 1:16 pm


Ok, thank you very much! All I have really changed so far is the eyes (I noticed the eyes in that picture were used by other artists, so I thought I should change them).

I could stick with that style for chibis, but then I will have to make an average style.

*sigh* this could take a while whee

I'll keep your tips in mind
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