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Xahmen
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 4:14 pm
I was vomiting into a urinal.

I was standing in front of the basement door, terrified of the monster behind it.

I was standing in the park when the bomb hit.

Do it.

I was bound with my hands behind ductaped behind a toilet; and there were pieces of skin nailed to the walls.

I felt the fire in my veins and instantly knew I had done too much.

I have a migraine.

I have a problem.

The drugs are killing me.

I woke up in a meadow full of orange twilight.

I opened my eyes to find myself in a blood encrusted bathroom.

I didn't know who the man was, but he had no eyes.

I told the girl to shower as soon as she stepped into my house.

I have a brain tumor, I haven't told anyone yet.

I woke up this morning leaking a black fluid from my nose.

I'm not okay, the Writer has died and I'm stuck here.

I had a dream last night where I killed my boyfriend.

I got a call from my boyfriend's boss today.

I was cutting lines of blow when she got out of the shower.

I felt one of my ribs crack under the cop's feet.

I woke up to see the girl standing over me.



Opening lines from all of my stories.  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 4:25 pm
Completely unique, but combine them all and it almost reads as a conscious free verse poem.  

[ In Nomine Satanas ]


Gomenroia

PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:34 pm
That's what I thought I was reading until the end... free verse poetry...


I wanna read them now!  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:42 pm
yeah i thought it was free verse too. It kinda got to a point where I thought you were talking about saw with the brain tumor and all the symptoms jigsaw goes through.  

[Hollow Point]


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:50 pm
it's really like a poem...it seems lkike it's all the same story, almost...  
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