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 Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 6:52 pm
How does this look? I drew this at 3 a.m this morning since I had a bad case of insomnia.
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 11:34 pm
Ooo...I love it! Especially the pose!
I don't see many anatomical mistakes. Maybe make the guy's face a little shorter?
I would also suggest making the lines darker/smoother. In other words, create a lineart. :]
Character design, movement, emotions, all wonderful!
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:39 pm
I wish I was that lucid at 3am. I think it's really good. Maybe the sickle could be a little smoother around, but that's the only thing I can think of.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 8:05 pm
Awesome. Plan awesome. I wouldn't be able to do that in 3am, or ever!
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 4:26 pm
awesome!! could ugive me lessons? jk
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 3:53 pm
thanks for the feedback, guys. now it's my turn.
The face could be a bit longer and the forearm should start lower, to make it propotionally accurate.
...The girl's face is too big o__O
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:29 am
the guys face is really long.....
overall its really good
i couldnt even wake up at 3 in the morning much less draw... blaugh
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:32 am
It is a very impressive pose, however, the drawing would probably look a bit clearer/cleaner if you inked it =D
Overall, nicely done ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 12:34 pm
The reason it's not inked is becase it's supposed to be a sketch. It's actually still in the planning phase, but aside from that, my ink pens are all dryed out.
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 12:01 am
eek Wow! It's a very pretty drawing. One way to improve it would be to make the guy's expression more intense. As in making the mouth wider or raising the eyebrows. I would make creases between the eyebrows or something. sweatdrop
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