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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:23 am
This is my story Camp.

Summary: Ian Brookes is sent to a summer camp by his mother, not knowing that what awaited him there was the love of his life and the best friends he'd have. Throw in a crazy group leader and you have your selves a once in a lifetime experience!
Warnings: Yaoi/Slash/BoyxBoy Stuff, future mentions of self-harm in the re-written version, mentions of anorexia and attempted suicide in the original.

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Longest running story I've written and one I'm most proud of biggrin Please read it! I want comments on the original how to make it better for the re-written!  
PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:09 am
I'm reading the revised one now, I read the original last night. Right now all I can suggest is that you go back to the way travis and wesley said they were a couple in the original.  

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Xahmen
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 4:53 pm
I love the concept but the Boy on Boy stuff says "Stay Away".
Thank you for the disclaimer, that was very responsible.  
PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 6:29 pm
*cough* Yaoi?

OKay, bad Kirby. Stop being discriminatory. *reads*


Waiiiit, hold on. Is it shonen-ai or actual yaoi? O.o No gay sex for me, thanks.  

KirbyVictorious

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