Poem!!

[miss_zita]

Tell me whta you think.....


Thoughts of death

A knife in her hand
Held close to her arm
Willing to bleed
Scared of the pain.

Thoughts of death
Flow through her mind
Been the same since it happened
Maybe even before.

She doesn't understand why
Her life is great
Only small faults
That feel like giant weights.

When the blade finally cut
It hurt only a bit
Though they weren't deep
They were still there.

Her friends soon found out
And they asked her why
She didn't know what to tell them
So she made up a lie.

But one special friend made her promise
Promise to never do it again
She's kept that promise
Until now.

It's getting harder to control
These thoughts of death
Though I still keep my promise
I'm not sure how long it will last.  

[x0_blink182_0x]

Ew. Thats the worst thing I have ever read. It makes me want to vomit! NO! IM KIDDING! Thats actually really good. I really like it. Almost as much as I like the stories you write about me and Frankie smile But seriously, that's amazing.  

[SUMMERWlNE]

When it says "until now" i love it. because "until now" really doesnt go togehter, it sets off the rythm.

i love the last line.