AH My second poem ever posted.

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AHA! Hey guys. This is going to be my second poem I've posted on this site. If you like my poems, let me know, so this one definatatly won't be the last!

*BRØKEN*

I’m sitting in my room,
I’m talking on the phone.
Yøu say this love isn’t working out,
And yøu think that I should go.

Hello? Are yøu there? I say,
No answer on yøur end.
All I hear is the dial tone,
So I hang up and grab my bear.

I grab the bear yøu won for me,
That night we went to the fair.
And at that moment then I heard,
‘Yøu know he doesn’t care.’

So I go down to the kitchen,
And I open up the drawer,
I reach out for the sharp bladed knife,
And I sit down on the floor.

I grab a pen and paper,
And write a bunch of words,
With the sharp bladed knife in my lap,
My life passed me by.

I took the knife,
And held it up,
And flipped my palm up right.
I put the knife up to my wrist,
And yøu can guess what happened next.

My walls are closing in.
My breath is getting short.
My heart is beating fast.
And the world is getting dark.

What on earth is happening to me?
Is it my time to go?
Oh please God no! Please not now!
I don’t want to go!

It’s the day of my funeral,
Everyone is there.
It’s sunny, It’s beautiful, Best day if my life,
Too bad I wasn’t there.

The doctors say I cut too deep.
And I died from loss of blood.
This is yøur entire fault,
For giving me a broken heart.  

[[Catharsis Message]]

No offense.

You write relatively well, but it's just a touch too emo for me.

It's stereotypcial.  

[16 Prayers]

OMG THATS THE BEST ******** POEM I'VE EVER READ!!!!!
You're good at writing
but that was depressing emo  

[miss_zita]

OMG Jaime it's soooooooooooooooooooooo good, i love your writing!!!!!!