The poem I'm Getting published

[Emo Attack]

Save me from
my dark inside,
where monsters Creep,
Our worlds collide.
You left me here
All alone,
You ignored me
when we were on the phone.
I thought what we had
Was ,oh, so strong.
It held me up
for so long,
But you snapped the rope
that held me there,
And you didn't help,
You just stopped and you stared.
I wanted you,
I wanted you bad.
You tore me away
from all that we had.
I want you back.............  

[miss_zita]

really good, i like the way it flows.  

[Emo Attack]

thanx  

[Hikaru Akumu]

Mmm...I have to say, It's Good. I think it would look a bit more organized if it was in stanza. ><'' I like stanzas..But it would be really good if you put an enter after

'You just stopped and you stared."

But otherwise, pretty good. :] keep it up m'dear!  

[TrueNamu]

It was very good.It was worth reading.  

[xodancingsunflower]

it was pretty good XD  

[SoBloodxSilkoS]

I liked it... I didn't really think the last line went with it though... But alas, I am not the writer ^_^ GJ! Two thumbs way up  

[Glamboy`]

20 seconds of my life i'll never get back. Thank you.