Ametris 3.0

[KirbyVictorious]

Homigoodness, Kirby's writing another version of Ametris.

But unlike the first, I'm wholly satisfied with the previous one. This might jst be the beginning to the second version.

So, without forther ado, Ametris Chapter One Version 3.0

Midmorning, and silence reigned but for the chirping birds and the rustling of squirrels in the pine trees. The two children held their breath, motionless in the shadows. No sound could be made, and not before their huntress passed them by would they dare to even blink.

The huntress in question, a teenage elf, seethed with frustration that clearly showed as she called their names. "Kamile! Everan!"

Not a movement from the two, as every soft motion of hers echoed in the stillness.

"I know you're there!" she insisted to the ash a score of yards away. "And you had better come out right now!"

Kamile exchanged an amused glance with her friend, who elbowed her in the ribs before she started to laugh. Shh, quiet, he warned. She nodded solemnly, her expression belying the mischievous shine in her eyes as their huntress passed within feet of their hiding place. She sighed.

"Fine," the elfin girl muttered, viciously kicking a daisy in very un-elven behavior. "I give up, I'm going back."

Slwoly, her footsteps faded away. Kamile and Everan held their breath for as long as they were able before they burst out laughing, tumbling out of the shadows and into the pale yellow light.

Hardly a single leaf was disturbed by their presence; they were familiar with the trees and animals alike, and their tiny, light footsteps made not a sound.

All I got. Whatcha think? I love using the word "tumbling" when it comes to kids heart it makes them seem so clumsy and adorable, liek they're rolling down a hill or something ^^[  

[Reese_Roper]

Kirby, you make everything sound so cute and aborable! whee


It makes up for my sad and depressingness. ninja

 

[NovaKing]

aww dont be depresed sad life is to short to be sad.  

[KirbyVictorious]

I make EVERYTHING cute and fluffy at the beginning.

Wait'll you see the middle or so of Lacausta.

That's some dark crap, there.  

[Spastic waffles]

It was cute.

There's just no other word for it.  

[KirbyVictorious]

yay! Just the effect I was going for.