Applause, applause, no wait wait.(A poem)

[xx z o m b i e]

Chyeah,first poem I've written in a year.

Fallow me into the dark.
Hold me tight.
Promise me you won't mention the mark.
Swear you don't want to fight.

Blood stains in the dress.
Share the pain of all these years.
How could this become such a mess?
And the blood mixes with the tears.

Press your lips against mine.
Hearts beating fast.
Make my eyes shine.
If only this love would last.

For this happiness will come to an end.
Tell me goodbye.
My heart will never mend.
Look me straight in the eye.

 

[xJet+Black+Feelingx]

Two thumbs up!  

[e x m o t i o n a l]

Morbid... It's good though. The rhyming is really good, it doesn't seem forced. There's a spot in the middle where you sort of lose the rhythm though. This poem reminds me of someone. *tear*
Aside, wow... a year without writing a poem? I'd die. [not literally]

<3 cat

you were right when you said i had lied
but you were wrong to think i would care
if i had the choce i would just have died
died for that beauty so fair...