poem:it hurts inside

[wildfiresdeath]

when i have no sholder to lean on it hurts.
when knowing im usless is my only
perspective of life
and the only thing to comfort me is a
cold blade peircing my skin
it hurts inside when i cant sleep because
i dont have anyone to talk to about it
it hurt inside cole west when i heard you call me a freak
live my life for two hours
feel the emtyness
sorrow
and lonelyness
i miss the warmth
the only warmth i feel
is tears rolling down my face
from my scarred soul
it hurts inside when you cut me
gash me
scar me
rape me of my induviduallity
it hurts so bad
it hurts like death

 

[Im_a_lost_cause]

thats really good. it was extremely sad cry but i really did like it. you may get this alot and i dont want to sound annoying but are you ok?  

[-Dotted-Delete]

very deep !!!
but i think u could make the end better use like , big word at the end or add another sentence to it  

[cursed imp]

good poem 3nodding