Murder

[Emo Attack]

Note: I wrote this about one of my best friends boyfriend 'cuz man does he ever tick me off! Yet he is still my friend............I'm so hopeless. confused

The blade swevels
towards his cold heart,
the blood pours out
and it's only the start.
I stab his back.
I feel no shame,
I could have shot him
but I have bad aim.
I hear him gasp
for one last breath
and I hold his neck
till his death.  

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that's good but i think i should be longer but then we all know that sometime we run out of inspiration  

[Im_a_lost_cause]

I really liked it! honestly i really did. mrgreen It was very well thought out.