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So, this picture is for my friend of her character, Lydia, but I suck at drawing humans...Dx So please critique so I can improve for future reference. Eeesh, the hand is like, arthritis-ness and the umbrella is like, retarded crap-ness. oxo I could go on and on...XD but I'll stop to save your ears...and eyes. Again, PLEASE critique! D: I only have the lineart for now...I'm about to color it. Hopefully I can make a few changes before I color it...

Oh, and the setting will be rain. X3

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Yay, thanks a lot everyone for voting on the poll, and critiquing! It helped a lot, and I have yet to improve.^^

Here's how it turned out.... Colored. owo

I wasn't exactly please with how it turned out...D: But it's a lot better than what I imagined. o____O;;

Heh heh...XD here's the shading without the line art. And eyes...x__x I usually do my eyes last. =3 Again, thanks you all! heart

Eyeless...o.O;;

Ok, thanks a lot for commenting and critiquing! =3

When it's coloured I am sure it will look better.

A little out of proportion but it's a good job

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The idea is good, and I think it'll look good once it's finished, but the proportions (really the nose the most) and the perspective (I mean the umbrella) need some improvement. Good luck; I'll be anticipating the final picture. 3nodding