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 Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:26 am
I finally got a Tablet, so I decided to try it. This is my first drawing with my new tablet and first drawing ever colored on a pc xp
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j125/nasa18/NewImage-1.jpg
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:41 am
Definitely OK! It actually looks like you've got practice. Lots of it. domokun
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 5:57 pm
Wow, that's really good! I've never used a tablet, so I have nothing to say about that, but I love the pose and atmosphere in your picture. heart
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 12:08 pm
WHOAZ. O-O That's definitely great! =D The hair must've taken a long time...owo
I wish I had a tablet. D: I've been wanting it for two years...>w< But I'm not really allowed to get one.
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 10:25 am
As an artist i know what its like not to hear anything that will help me improve please dont take to offense anything i say i shall like to critique your art for you so you can know what to work on next time. From what i see it is a very nice peice of art, a couple things you could try to work on next time though is first of all the hands they look a little bit clunky they need to not be as wavy. Another thing i noticed is that the eye is protruding from the head and it is also looking back at the person look at your picture. Now normally the boy looking at you is not a problem but thats where the background comes in. There is a bit too much empty space in this picture and the main focal point (the thing you look at first) is the light in the background now if you wanted this to be the focal point thats not bad but if that is the focal point then you should have the boy looking at the light and not back at you. I hope i have helped you out some if you have any questions about anything i would love to help you out again. Your work is very nice and i would love to see more. blaugh
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