New Drawings^^

[[~Lam~]]

I'd just like some opinion of the new drawings I have. Of course, these are still pencil and I know of some proportional errors. However, I'd like to see what your opinions are of these...

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7275/zhenlittleon0.jpg

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/1078/chapter3coverjn2.jpg  

[Hayami_kiri]

Like you just said there are some proportion problems that need to be fixed and i think in the second one the eyes need to be smaller because they are bulging out of thier head and the guys chin is a little square sweatdrop I dont want to be mean but i think you should work on them a little bit more.  

[Sie Shee]

very nice, i like the style what kind of paper is that? Would you mind telling what you think of my art?
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[demonic-azkan]

sup one and all  

[aquatic wind]

pretty good but it seems out of proportion or something like that -.-;  

[xtoo many unicornsx]

The first one is really cute! What a sad little girl, though. D:
The second one looks cool, but the woman's crotch is a bit high. n_n; Are you going to color these?