Burn It. (a Song) | Page 1 | Art and Poetry | Guild Forums

Gaia Guilds

What do you think genius? Its a guild for emo's.

Burn It. (a Song)

Nerril

Invisible Duck

Offline

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 4:09 am


	26 de enero, del dos mil siete. Okay, if anyone steals this, I will hunt you down and you will die a slow, painful death at my hands!!! That being said: Take my heart Darling Strike the match hold it close Watch the blood turn to steam then condensate into raindrops that fall on your tongue and teardrops that fall down your face I'm tired of being brave This life has been too long I'm tired of having to breath So strike the match dearest As it all burns away This day will haunt you As a turned to you and asked: "Is there a god? Is there salvation? Can I just fall back and close my burning eyes and feel it all melt away?" Screaming Dying Loving Crying Cutting Hating Living Breathing As my heart falls so I fall darling Take this match Burn a candle for me in this long parade of Death These bloodstained hands have dropped the dagger The coffins filled my breathing stills Forevermore.

Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:18 am


	it's good but some of the lirics didn't make sense but still good idea and (to my imagination) good beat

VirgilXX_Treephiliac

Offline

Nerril

Invisible Duck

Offline

Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 2:39 pm


	Thanks. I was in bit of a ranting mood right then, so that might be the reason it didn't make sense. sweatdrop

Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 6:20 pm


	Thank you for having a workable rhythm. Sounds like something I would have written before I got my songwriting chops.

-Isel-

Offline

Mortal Apparition

Offline

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:09 pm


	I dunno...The beat isn't coming to me...

Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:01 pm


	killadroid I dunno...The beat isn't coming to me... Shrugs That's fine, it depends on how you read it. The way I write poetry, every line is supposed to represent a beat....I think. I'm not exactly sure how I write the beats in...it just comes to me and sounds right.