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Chapter 2
Kurai and Rayan continued on down the strange mossy green grass fields of Geffen (seriously Geffen has the ugliest Grass eva.. other then Mt. Mijonor or whatever). Both of them smacking open a few orc skulls opened on the way.
"Hey dude.." Kurai slowly looked up from the side of his head. "How long you been using that sword..." Kurai slowly flicked his sword with his fingers playfully. Rayan slowly scratched his head and then turned it over and over in his hand. "well... uhh.. the Swordsman leader says i should be around lvl 23 with this sword now..." He said with a nervous voice. Kurai picked up the sword flimsy and then smirked. "You can't expect to go around the ORc fields with this lil thing can you?" He chuckled. "come now.." Kurai then threw his backpack off and searched through it.
"But.. Tale... is here and i need to get her out of here..." Rayan said softly not really wanting to remind himself of it. "And i promised ill protect her.. so.." Rayan was then interrupted by Kurai. "Yeah yeah... Promised to take care of her. Promised to be by her side yadda yadda." Kurai smirked and then slowly pulled out a different sword. "Here try using this..." There he held in front of him a simple katana. Rayan clumsily grabbed it with one hand and the sword slipped out.
"nono.. hold it with two hands..." Kurai slowly said and Rayan nodded and held it with two hands. Slowly Rayan smirked and then gave it a few rough swings. "Sweet! this sword is nice!" He said and then fell forward from teh wieght of the sword. Kurai chuckled and then kneeled down to him. "Its a two handed sword though... so you may want to learn a different sword style...
Rayan nodded and then lifted himself up. "Hey... Thats that orc house..." Rayan pointed to one of the strange houses in front of him. Kurai slowly blinked and then stood up turning about. "yeah.. its an orc house.. what about it?" Kurai scratched the back of his head. Rayan quickly got up and ran twoards it without saying a word. Kurai stood stil for a momment suprised of his actions. "AH!" Kurai let out of his mouth before chasing after him.
Inside a bright light flashed out passed the doorway. "MAGNUM BREAK!" Came out the young male voice of Rayan as there was a sychronized yell of Orcs. Kurai quickly rushed inside and looked about him. There inside the simple orc house was a huge mob of orcs along with one mage gurl with long green hair and kafra headband on, curled up in a corner covering her face. Next to her was a poring also huddled up in teh corner. "That must be Tale.." Kurai muttered to himself as he quickly placed the claw firmly onto his fist.
"Im sorry orcs. But this is for justice i guess.." Kurai then threw both of his hands forward and aimed it twoards Rayan, slowly chanted a prayer and Rayan forcefully shot forward with his arms. "yah!" Rayan cried out suprised as one slash went straight down an orcs body. "wha.. i feel light.." He yelled out quickly sidestepping a few orc slashes. "agi, Bless.." Kurai smiled happily placing hips on his side.
Rayan smiled and looked back at Kurai. "Thanks " He smirked and tehn quickly threw out another slash.
Finally after all the orcs in the room fell to the ground Rayan quickly ran over to Tale. Kurai proceeded to dig through the orcs corpses again. "hmm broken axe... voucher... iron.." He said slowly tossing a few to the side and some into his backpack.
"Tale!" Rayan quickly ran up to her with a concerned voice. Tale didnt move her hands off her face but the poring looked up to Rayan with a concern look. "blip.." Replied the Poring to Rayan. Rayan threw his hands onto the ground and angrily shut his eyes. "I'm sorry Tale.. i told you i would protect you.. but i ran when i saw the orcs coming..." He then dashed his sword into the hard wooden floor of the orc's house and procceded to shake in fury. "but once i see those orcs coming again.. ill make sure each of them die.. every one of them..." He then slowly blinked as he felt a gentle touch on his shoulder. he looked up and saw Tales green hair, she had rested her head against Rayan's shoulder holding him tightly as if frightened. Rayan felt horrible. "... ill make sure.. ill protect you better.." He said slowly standing up and helping her while at it. Kurai observed them with a smile and then stood up tipping his romantic gent again.
"Well with that all said and done.. shall we go to Geffen?" Kurai said smiling. The two nodded and Kurai slowly turned about. "heh alright.." He said and then quickly froze as he saw a strange shadowy figure by the doorway.
"An Assasin.." Kurai slowly muttered as he could make out the signature weapon of Katars on their arms. SLowly the Assasin walked up to him. His hair waved off a strange golden glow and his face was covered up mostly. "heh.. well.. isn't this a touching scene... the promise of two first class people. Could this mean forever on till they become powerful second jobs they will stick togehter? Defeating powerful MVPs?" He chuckled. Kurai slowly turned back at Rayan and Tale. Rayan looked at the assasin disguisted while Tale still seemingly mentally disturbed continued to cling onto Rayan. The assasin shook his head slowly. "And what a weak monk.. using chain combos.. and such.. you will never beat MVPs alone with that romantic gent on your head while your at it..." He smirked.
Kurai quickly glared at him. "I like my romantic gent thank you.. despite it not being the strongest headgear of all..." The man laughed and slowly pulled something out from his Shuriken pocket on his belt. "Kitsune.. Kitsune is my name... Let my name be somewhat of a warning to those who cannot see the ways of Zenith. Zenith are the homes of only the strongest warriors of Ragnarok. we Don't really welcome those who can't become strong enough." He slowly then pulled out a simple branch and then dropped it on the ground. Then with his foot he quickly slammed onto the branch snapping it in half. and a strange misty fog flooded the orc house. Kurai and the two first classmen covered their faces in defense.
Once the mist cleared another orc had taken place of the branch. This one however had a strange blue skin tone other then the normal green ones. His face was filled with battle aura and his skin seemed tough as leather. He snorted out an angry puff of hot air before he looked at the 3 in the room hungrily. Kurai sucked in air angrily. "A dead branch... you.." Kurai then looked back to Kitsune. but he had already dissepeared. "s**t.." Kurai muttered angrily sliding back a bit into a fighting stance.
Thoughts on Chap. 2 part 1 ((yes Rayan what kinda of story would it be like if there wasnt some cute Determined Swordsman wishing to protect the gurl and such XP. I guess you could say he ran away from the orc mob at first but now hes all like. HOly Crap! im never going to do that again!
"I'm on a never ending quest to save mai Gurlfriend!!!" - Anoynomus ))
Kurai quickly placed his palms together and then out from the center of his palm formed a gentle and subtle white light. Quickly he tossed it into the air and the light quickly split into 5 different round white balls which then levitated and rotated around Kurai's body and head. Kurai's face seemed to fill with a eager battle aura.
"Gomen High Orc.. But this is to protect these kids..." Kurai smiled and then tipped his hat. Quickly the Orc feeling mocked Rushed up to Kurai with his heavy weight and swung down the axe heavily twoards him. Kurai's eyes grew with suprise as he barely dodged the axe. The axe missing continued on down twoards the orc house floor shattering a woode floor panel, kicking up pieces everywhere.
"Nani..." Kurai muttered and then found himself an opening as he quickly kicked off the floor and back twoards the orc. "Triple Blow!" Kurai yelled out and first swung his fist up into the air like an uppercut then quickly throwing his elbow from that position into the orc's face then finally lashing his arm about to make a nice solid lashing motion of the fist across the orcs face. ((thank you Kula of King of Fighters 2001 XP or else i would never figure out how a triple blow could work XP)) Then he slowly he lifted up his palm of his hand and the earth shook with might and a beam of an unknown holy light arose from the bottom of the floor shattering the floor and slamming the Orc's body slowly into the sky. "Chain Combo!" Kurai yelled out. After 4 rays of light shattering onto the orcs body the ORc fell solid onto teh ground and Kurai slammed his fist directly onto the vurnable position of the orc. "Raging Thrust!" and one of the balls of light went straight into Kurai's fist adding an extra impact onto the final punch. the Punch sent the High orcs body straight across the ground smearing his heavy body and strange green blood across the floor.
Kurai let out a tired gasp as he smiled at the Orc's body on the floor. The whole floor was shattering in places here and there and Rayan Stared straight at Kurai with Awe. The poring went "Blip" XP. Slowly Kurai turned about to the 3 and placed a warm smile on his face. "Well that wasn't too hard was it ^^" he chuckled. Rayan nodded as Tale still hid her face onto Rayan's shoulder. Rayan then let out a suprised gasp and quickly took out his sword. "Kurai...." He muttered slowly. Kurai sensing danger in his voice slowly turned about to see a very much feared figure. there stood the Orc Hero and about him was more of the Strange coloured Blue orcs. The headgear the Orc lord wore shoned against the powerful sunlight outside and directly shone back twoards the 4 blinding each one of them. The heavy breathe of airs each orc produced started to fill the air with a heavy stench, and a very heavy aura.
Kurai slowly shuddered in fear. "ahh... Orc hero.." Kurai knew perfectly that he was not able to defeat such a monster. Rayan nodded slowly and Tale continued to grasp onto Rayan's shoulder tighter. The poring quickly found himself a hiding spot. Kurai made a soft sigh and then yelled out a loud battle cry. "RUn!" He cried out grabbing Rayan's hand and then rushed past the orc hero at the doorway hoping he would not get hit. But the High orcs grabbed him and then smashed him onto the ground. Quickly Kurai tossed Rayan and Tale ahead of him causing them to fall and topple across the grassy plains. "GO!" He yeleld out to them as the Orc hero brought down his broken blade straight down into Kurai's back. Kurai forced out a painful cry. He could feel the blade ripped straight down into his back.
".. ahh.." Kurai slowly muttered out. Rayan slowly froze in fear and Tale slowly turned her head to take a peek what was going on. Tale's eyes were filled with a deep pool of expression and worry. she then quickly twisted her head back into Rayan's shoulder. Kurai slowly slammed the ground and then kicked himself up and straight into one of the High orcs face. Quickly he summoned force another heal spell and applied it onto his back. After that the orcs replied to the spell with slashes from everywhere. Kurai's body was whapped about like a simple rag doll, ripping up his clothing and body parts. "AHH!" Kurai yelled out in pain as he was forced to stumble down onto the ground.
Slowly Kurai grabed his arm in pain and force shutted one eye from the pain. "ahh.." Was all he managed to get out. "Why haven't you left my sight you idiots!" Kurai yelled twoards Rayan and Tale. Rayan slowly lifted up his blade. "Cause i can't let you stand and fight alone!" He yelled out angrily he then lifted up his katana and then rushed twoards the HIgh orcs. Kurai yelled out to him. "STOP DAMN IT!" He then lifted himself up angrily as if he was going to be a threat to him too, but Kurai was only met with another orc axe slamming into his body slashing him back twoards the ground with pain. "GAH!!" Kurai ylled out as more blood spilled across the grass field dying the dirt red. Rayan's battle fury rose as he watched this and then quickly brought his blade down into the crowd with his glowing sword.
"MAgnum Break!" And once again on impact of the sword another hot compressed battle aura exploded into the crowd spreading them into different directions. The orcs turned to Rayan seeing a new target. "Come on and Bring it!" He stared down onto teh orc hero and his mob. Rayan's face was falsely covered with confidence for deep down inside he could feel the fear developing fast within him. He slowly then just relized Tale was still clinging onto him. Rayan relizing the mistake he has made bringing Tale into the fight. "ahh.. no.. Tale Get off of me! you were suppose to be back there!" Tale shook her head without lifting up her face off of Rayan's shoulder. Rayan slowly felt touched on the inside and then stared back at the mob. "Fine.. then i guess ill have to win then..." Rayan gulped and then lifted up his sword into a defensive position as the Orc hero Brought down his blade.
There was a heavy orc rawr as Rayan shut his eyes tightly. All he could hear was orc screams everywhere. but then as he slowly lifted his eyes open he was suprised to see a hail of arrows coming from above him showering down onto the crowd of orcs. Each orc Panicked and ran about as the arrows fell from teh sky skewering them in various places. Rayan slowly turned to face a archer wearing an apple on his head and had short soft blue hair.
"Yo!" The man said with a cheerful and young voice. He then proceeded to twirl a couple of arrows across his finger and load it up onto his bow and fire off them into the sky. Causing another wave of arrows falling straight down onto the crowd of orcs. He wore a crimson scarf about his neck and wore a strange winged pendant around his neck.
Rayan blinked and Kurai too.
"Well don't just stand there Mike and watch help me kill this freakin thing!" The archer with blue hair yelled out back behind him. His face was filled with excitment. There behind him stood a (handsome XP) Blacksmith with white hair. his eyes was a scary yellow colour of a wolves though. about him shined a similar Winged pendant of which the archer wore. The Blacksmith smiled. "Alright Robin.. sheesh.. so demanding.." He then rushed up carried the cart he had behind him with one hand. He then grabbed one of the handles of the cart with one hand and swung it about him.
"YAHH!! CART REVOLUTION!" He swung it violently and almost resaulted in hitting Kurai and his lil 1st classers. "WAH!" Kurai quickly ducked. "what the hell you trying to do!" he yelled out angrily covering his head. Mike smirked and then swung his cart about again. "trying to save your asses thats what!" He then gave it another full swing smacking about the high orcs and the orc hero itself away from them. Dust started to kick up more violentely as he continued to swing the cart about. "YAHH!!" Mike had on a tense face and his body was starting to fill up with a powerful battle aura. "Rush! Thrust! maximize!" He yelled out as he let out a battle cry. He then pulled out a strange cross shaped axe.
"ahh? Light Espilion.." Kurai muttered under his breath he then slowly adjusted his claw again. "this should be rather interesting." Robin then fired off another bunch of Arrows into the sky showering down oin the sepreated mob and high orcs. "there we go!" He cried out happily watching the final bits of high orcs fall to the ground exhausted. Rayan's mouth opened with amazment. "wahhh..." He said happily. Tale didn't move at all though nobody could even tell if she knew what was happeneing either.
"Mammoite!" Mike cried out pulling out a large bag of gold and Smacking the Orc hero across the face with it. On contact the bag ripped and zeny flew outwards everywhere about them. "hehe oops.. there goes some of the guild's money!" he chuckled/. Kurai rushed in to help the Blacksmith. "you seem pretty easy going dude.." Kurai smiled at the black smith as he threw his fist froward into the orcs flesh. "thats cause i know im going to win" Mike siad smiling back at him. his wolven eyes seemingly gleam with confidence.
Robin quickly stacked up two arrows into his bow and then shut one eye to aim. "You got a pretty nice lookin mage gurl over there Swordsman." He shouted out twoards rayan. rayan slowly turned over to Robin's attention. "My name is Rayan.. and.. ... where exactly are you going with that statement?" He asked slowly looking at robin and then Tale. The archer smirked. "oh nothing really... Rayan... is she your sister?" he said slowly drawing the bow back ready to realease the arrows staright into the Orc. Rayan frowned and then slowly placed a hand over Tale's head. "No..." He said firmly. Robin slowly let out a smile. "damn." and then released the arrows straight into the orc.
The two arrows almost shot straight into Mike's back. But landed on the High orc with so much impact that it threw him backwardss slightly. Mike quickly turned back to Robin and gave off an angry frown. "Dude! what the heck are you doing!?" he frowned. Robin rubbed the back of his head and shrugged. "Hey just dont move so much! dont worry though mai aiming is realll good XP" he said sticking out a tounge playfully before twirling another batch of arrows into his hand. Mike gave off a groan and rolled his eyes. "Im fighting dude how the hell should i stay still?" he siad before giving off another powerful slice into the orc's flesh. Kurai felt somewhat weak as he watched Mike's reptitive and flash slashes. "wow.. your so fast..." he slowly said.
Mike smirked and then looked back at Kurai. "your not from around here are you?" he said smiling. Kurai shook his head and then turned back to the orc and threw his fist and claw out again. Mike slowly brought his slashing to a hault and then quickly looked back at Kurai. "Move.. NOW!" he yelled out running back. Kurai blinked and then saw that the orc has somehow found some unknown source of energy and had launched himself into the air. "Wahh!??!" Kurai quickly took a few steps back as he looked straight up at the orc. "Dude! RUN!" Mike yelled sounding more urgent. Kurai quickly then unfroze and ran. The orc then fell down twaords Kurai with the increasing speed of gravity his sword seemingly has gained some power of electricty as it gave off an eerie blue glow.
The sword barely missed Kurai as Kurai stumbled forward away from the blade. as the blade made contact with the ground it gave off a powerful blast of electricity shattering the earth and firing off its blue glow. "NOW ROBIN!" Mike yelled out. Then Robin quickly fired off another arrow shower straight twoards the orc hero this time. It hit directly in various spots. two smacked straight into his legs. One hit directly into his eyes. 3 on some straps of his armor and the final one hit directly into the shoulder bone of his arm. The orc hero gave off a painful cry and his armor seemingly fell off him. slowly he fell twoards the ground unable to move. Mike walked up to the Orc with a evil smile on his face. "now you die..." his wolf eyes gleamed a violent aura as he slowly brought his cross shaped axe next to the orcs face. Kurai slowly stood back up and dusted himself. "wow.." He slowly muttered and then there was a violent, thick, sound of blood spilled.
Tale grabbed onto Rayan tighter and Rayan's eyes was filled with a new horror.
Thoughts on Chap. 2 part 2 Hehe first fight scene. There is a lot more to come. I loved Mike and Robins intro here. But of course.. hehe it sorta sucked at the same time. And for those of you dunt know. Dead branches are items that spawn a randomn monster. MVPs like the orc hero can't come out of it though. I just had to add it in though/ XD
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(( ::Stretches:: Gosh.. i absoultly feel dead... RO is slowly sapping away my life rite now... But that could be a good thing.. Cause now i am able to interact with mai friends better then before now. its rather nice and such. Of course.. theres the thing where i stay up to 3 am now... hehee... Thanks for the feedback guys XP, and just to let you know. I am having a seriously hard time trying to find a way to add Solitear and Falcon to the story XP. but they are a must have for the story, oo.. idea just popped in mai head.. hehee... i think i know how to add them now... XP. Expect Mew, X-baby, more of Majikk, Sakura (Sakurababy), some of Sal XP, and maybe.. just maybe Kisame if im feeling nice to be added in the story just since some people have been asking. Of course its just the matter of fitting it into each of the 3 main characters plots (Kurai, Rayan, Kitsune). oh yeah. Somone has to die too. Can't be a good fanfic if somone dosen't die... ::draws a name from a big bowl:: ))
Wake Up Chapter 9
Mike was outside in Pontera field during the late afternoon. He leaned over and stared down at his reflection in the lake as he slowly dappled his bare feet into the water. "she's late.." He muttered underneathe his breathe. "i hope she makes it here.." He sighed and then stared up squinting at the bright sun which shone across the clear lake. He then felt a nudge against his back and then somone leaning down on him. Two silky sleeves of a gurls outfit slowly crossed across his chest and then interlocked about him.
"About time you came... i was worrying if you didn't make it..." Mike smiled as he slowly brought his hand up to the two gurl hands around his chest. A small sound of wind and a small whistle sounded out of the gurl's mouth. Mike turned about and was greeted by the gurls long black hair which tickled his face. MIke smiled in content as he slowly nudged the gurl's face with his nose. The gurl laughed as he felt the brush against him and then let out another sound of wind from her mouth. "Sohee.." Mike slowly lifted up his hand and played with her hair. The sohee slowly moved her head about and the bell ornaments on her hair jingled a soft clear and soothing sound.
Mike's eyes then flashed out a yellow gleam from his wolven eyes as he quickly twisted about and brought the Sohee twoards the grass. The Sohee let out a suprised breathe of air along with a quick jingle of her bells. "Sohee. please." Mike had some tears in his eyes as he slowly leaned down twoards her. The sohee quickly shut her eyes and shook furiously. Her bells in her hair quickly let out a series of jingles with it.
Mike slowly wiped back the Sohee's hair and then looked down at her. "Sohee..." He slowly whispered and then leaned forward to kiss her. The sohee's eyes shot opened and then quickly turned red ((how does a undead virigin spirit blush? don't ask me..)) and then quickly shoved Mike away. Mike chuckled. "You know you like it Sohee.."
Suddenly the Sohee let out another quick breath of air and then somehow found a burst of energy to shove MIke off her and then into the lake. Mike let out a suprised gasp as a bright streak of light shot forward twoards the sohee striking her straight into her body. IT gave of a holy glow as the Sohee trembled in pain from the arrow straight in her. Her body shot forward and her body glowed a strange blue aura. all of her hair shot about and her bells let out a violent jingle.
"Sohee!" MIke yelled out as he shot himself up and then look behind him to find the source of the arrow. There stood the silk wearing huntress Champagne. "... Champagne.." Mike quickly curled up his fist his blacksmith outfit stuck firmly to his body from the soak of the lake. Mike bared his teeth which showed some fangs. "MIke.. you disguist me.." Champagne let out furiously from her mouth as slowly a small tear formed in her face. Mike quickly then turned back to the Sohee and ran up to her. "Hang in there Sohee let me find somone to help you... somone..." MIke quickly had thoughts rushing about his head. i can't bring her to Pontera... she is not welcomed there... no priestess heal spell can really heal her... and shes already dead.. what am i to do.. MIke then just grabbed the arrow and then slowly pondered wether to pull it out or not. Slowly the sohee's hand reached over to MIke's hand worried from the pain. The sohee looked up at MIke painfully.
"..." MIke then squezzed his eyes shut and did a quick jerk yanking the arrow out of her. "NEH!" Mike didn't dare look after that. The sohee's body shot forward in pain and she quickly grappled the area of the wound. violent wind sounds came out of her mouth along with her series of jingles of her bells. "damn... it.." Mike slowly opened his eyes. "Sohee.." MIke then quickly turned back to Champagne who had two arrows ready in her bow aimed straight twoards MIke. "MIke.. your a monster.." She slowly whispered and then realesed the Bow. "NEH!" MIke let out from his mouth as he quickly reached for his Light espilion on his belt and shot forward with it smacking away the two arrows to the side. The arrows violently clanged agains the metal crossed axe.
"Champagne! What are you doing!? you can go to prison for that!" MIke yelled out as if worried about her. Champagne just let a hand through her hair slowly letting out a smile with some tears. ".. well so can you.. aiding a monster... do you not know Zenith's place is only for humans? You and your foolish beliefs of monsters living in peace with us..." She then quickly pulled out a 8 arrows and loaded them up in her bow. She then with great strength pulled them all back. Mike Stared up at her action. "Zenith is to be a place where humans and monsters can live in peace... Humans are the monsters Champagne.. greedily taking land for just their own happiness and such. What about the orcs? or the kobolds? The other tribes of monsters who need some land too? They only want to live.. The undeads just need more place for their resting place and what do we do? We go straight into their tombs gathering their treasures and destroying their own decaying corpses.." MIke slowly smiled.
"Your just jelouse.." He hissed straight twoards Champagne through his teeth as his wolven eyes narrowed evilly. Champagne shuddered with anger and then glared twoards Mike. "Die." She let out hatefully and then released her bow. Quickly MIke Leaped forward at inhumane speed and threw his LIght espilion about him creating a strange ball of blur from his speed of swinging. Each arrow let out a bolt of light from contact from the blurs of Mike's axe and then fell to the side harmlessly. But one struck through and shot directly into MIke's arm. MIke's body in mid air strutted backwards a bit and MIke just grunted angrily. Champagne's eyes filled with fear as he saw that Mike's inertia from the body kept pushing him forward through the air twoards her.
"Champange!!" Mike then came up twoards her and swung back his axe behind his head and let down a mighty swing down twoards her. The huntress was blown back and blood splattered all about her pure silk clothing. staining it a dark red colour. Champagne let out a scream and then stumbled backwards holding her right side of her face. "Mike.." Her body quivered from the pain and emotion from within her. She leaned down twoards the ground.
((Finish this lata XP))
the rest of Chap. 9
Champagne's body quivered with anger as blood dripped violently off her face and her right side of the body. a Giant gash was left there. MIke slowly lifted up his axe and held it in front of his face. Slowly he licked the blood off the axe. "You want to kill me badly Champagne.." He then spat the blood off to the side then threw his axe down and opened his body. "Kill me then Champagne... if you so deeply want to..." He muttered and then lifted up his head. Champagne stared at Mike's defensless position. "I will kill you Mike.. You disguist me! your choice of loving a monster! I WILL Kill you!" She violentely shuddered and then with one eye forced shut and still bleeding off to the side she lifted up her bow and placed an arrow on it.
"I will enjoy watching this arrow burn away your body mike.." She then from the ring on her right hand glowed a strange dragon design. She blew on the ring and a small flame materialized right above it and then went straight into the arrow lighting it. Slowly she held the arrow back and just stared at Mike. "... why mike..." she slowly let out a tear, her body still shuddering from the pain. "Why did you choose to be like this Mike.. YOu know its wrong!" She then shut her eyes. "YOU KNOW ITS WRONG!!" She then let go of the arrow and it let out a tremedous force of fire that the recoil of the arrow threw Champagne backwards and onto the ground. The bright white light of explosion blinded Mike but he knew that it was going to hit him but he didnt move at all. Nor did he went into a defensive position.
A giant metallic clang was heard and a shield was seen flying right above Mike and then returning back into teh hands of teh user. It was Zero. The flame arrow harmlessly was on the ground right in front of Mike slowly burning and dying away. MIke slowly turned around angrily. "Crusador.. what do you think your doing?"
Champagne didn't look up but instead quickly lifted herself up and ran away. Mike quickly turned about and started to run twoards Champagne but was only greeted halfway in his sprint by Zero's Long blade. "I think you should worry about that one instead.." Zero softly spoke.
Mike slowly turned about to see Sohee. He then turned to the Crusador. "Whoever you are.. you shouldn't be messing with other people's business..." He violently hissed at Zero. Zero just had on a straight face still and just turned about. "You will think this is not my business Mike.. but really it is our business.." Zero slowly muttered and then walked off.
MIke stood there a bit suprised. he wondered how did this man already know his name. But he ignored those thoughts and quickly reminded himself of the situation his Sohee was in and quickly rushed up to her.
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((still.. need ... more.. ideas... ::dies:: ))
((guess this chapter will be dedicated to Mike our guildleader for now since i can't figure out how to get Rahan and Rayan together for a bit. Or what sort of torture Tale and RIchie will be up to... or how Falcon and Solitear will randomnly appear.... or what the Hell Kurai's going to do with a world stone... or... yeah.. you get the idea... please don't ask for spirit cards crying it just ruins my joy of making them. Over-generalization or something like that.. ))
a bit more to add to Chapter 9...
Mike quickly rushed up to Pontera's gate with the Sohee's in his arms. "Damn it..." He hissed to himself as he ran about his boots making a squishing sound for he was drenched in the lake. The sohee slowly opened her eyes to look up at Mike she slowly let out a soft breath. Mike didn't look down. "Hang in there damn it..." He said silently and then came up to the Gate. He slowly stopped as he saw the Pontera guard and the Kafra look at him strangely.
"HALT! What are you doing? No bringing monsters in here..." The female guard lowered her staff straight twoards Mike's face ((i think Pontera guards are females.. that or very very cute looking guys <3 ^^ if you guys eva saw their faces in IRO)) The yellow haired Kafra slowly scooted back nervously. Mike just slowly looked from the Sohee to the guard. "Shes a pet.." He said.
THe Guard slowly let out a hand. "Show me her tag..." The guard said angrily in disbelief. Slowly Mike let out an angry breath of air and then slowly walked up to the guard taking something out from his pocket. "... HERE!" He quickly grabbed her hand and then Swung her over his back with one swing. "HEE!!" The gaurd let out frightinly. The gaurds helmalt flew off and fell twoards teh ground letting out a toppling wooden sound and her staff clattered against the ground next to her. "HEY!" SHe yelled out quickly picking herself up. MIke Quickly sprinted straight into the city.
"STOP!" She yelled out and then reached for her whistle. Then a loud piercing whistle sound was heard. "STOP THAT MAN!" She yelled out. MIke quickly drank a Dark red and orange potion and felt a surge of power rush through his body as he tossed the Potion bottle straight back at the Guards face. THe guard fell backwards the glass shattering on contact. "b***h..." He muttered angrily as he quickly leaped about POntera town. "Don't worry Sohee we will get in.."
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"Rayan.." Rei curiously looked at Rayan packing up a few Potions in his backpack on his bed inside his pontera room inn. "Are you sure on this decision? will she be ok?" Rei asked curiosly as she slowly bounced while sitting on the bed across from Rayan. "yes... we both seen Kitsune and his strength.. i belive the only way to defeat him is to obtain this photon blade first..." He said slowly lifting up his orc blade and looked at it. "This thing would never defeat Kitsune.."
((Crap bell Chap. 9 will never be finsihed X_x;; ))
((couldn't sleep had to finish up chapter 9 without feeling guilty or something.. i dunno.. blame it on all this TAQ music.. or something.. ::yawn:: hope you get better Tale.. sounds like your possesed by an evil spirit XP Mike i finished your spirit card a while ago btw O_o; but i didn't get the PM of the stuf you wanted so the card does other things ^^:; go check it out in Fan Art section. ::rubs head:: I want to go to Jawaii in IRO XP.))
Final bits of Chapter 9.. i promise O_o;;
Rei slowly looked at Rayan's Orc sword and then twoards her own sword. She wielded a strange but very Smooth Korean sword. She then looked back up to Rayan. "Ok Onii-san.. if thats what you think is best.. For Tale and you..." She softly said as she then turned twoards the window. "Shall we go talk to Rahan now then?" She then hopped off the bed and placed her smooth sword back in its seathe. Rayan lifted up his backpack and swung it onto his back and gave a firm nod. "Yeah.." He then walked out twoards Rahan's room with Rei.
Rayan gave the door a few firm knocks on the door. Rahan's crisp and Mature voice came from within the Room. "Come in..." he said. Rayan slowly opened the door and there was Rahan once again reading old scrolls without his heavy crusador armor on. Rayan gave a little gulp and Rei went behind Rayan grabbing onto his arm, as if frightened by his presence. Rahan slowly turned about in his wooden seat and rested his arms on the backrest of the chair as he slowly smiled at the 2 swordsmen.
"Rayan... i am guessing your ready to find your friend hm?" He smirked and swung his long purple hair out of his eyes. His giant rosary slowly clanged about the wooden chair. Rayan nodded but his face seemed hostile against Rahan. Rahan noticed it and slowly picked up his excalibur that rested against the desk and held it up in front of his face. "I am guessing the reason we are going to kill another person is to do Justice and rescure another soul are we Rayan?" He slowly smiled. "The Foggy and cloudy human judgement..Beliving that Killing is ok.. and that they do it in the name of the 3 spiritual flows in this world, Love, Justice, and Hatred." He then once again turned twoards Rayan with an unusual smile and slowly lifted up his sword in front of his face.
"Whatever reasons humans kill for.. its never ok... Killing is evil overall..." He slowly let out a chuckle. "But no.. Humans have ignored this law here in Nadir. Killing is just an everyday thing for them now. Both monsters and Humans.. locked forever ito an eternal battle..." He then sighed. Rayan then let out an angry voice. "Stop it! Humans don't mean to do such a thing.. I don't like it either.. but we all have to.. seek power... and apparently killing is the only way to get it... cause without it.. none of us can live... to protect our friends.." He then quickly snapped back to face Rahan sternly. "I want to create a Photon Blade Rahan.. before i rescue Tale..." He said firmly. Rahan slowly looked at Rayan's face curiously. "heh.. and i suppose you have the ever so powerful and all mighty Chronstone to create such a weapon?" he then let out a series a laughter.
Rayan slowly reached into his pocket and took out the wrapped up stone and unwraveled it to show it to Rahan. The Chronstone let out a massive purple glow and shoned against his face. The aura from the stone gave off hope and power. Rahan hungrily look at the stone. "The Chronstone... the powerful.. almighty..." He then reached for it slowly. Rayan quickly covered it up and placed it back into his pocket. He stared down at Rahan. "Show me Rahan.. how to make the Photon Blade." he said with much urgency. "Who knows what Kitsune could have done to Tale by now."
Rahan nodded.. and then slowly lifted himself out of the seat he lifted up his heavy full plate armor and placed it on him. It let out a heavy mettalic clank and then he snapped it on him. his body looked immense and powerful now as he lifted up a shield 3/4 the size of him. "itll be a trip.. so i hope your ready..." he smiled and then slowly shook his head as he sighed. "Sigh.. you kids.." He then chuckled. Rayan looked up at Rahan a bit uneasily. "..." he said nothing but then just started out of the door.
the 3 then slowly walked down the hallway only to see a frantic Mike carrying a Sohee in his arm charging down twoards hi room. "Mike!" Rayan quickly drew out his orc blade and stared down at the Sohee. "wha...what are you doing.." He asked strangely. Mike Ignored him and just rushed past him twoards his room. Rayan blinked and Rahan quickly followed Mike. "Stay here kids.." He hissed twoards Rei and Rayan. Rei blinked and Rayan just strangely looked at them. "... what.." he slowly let out his mouth.
Mike quickly rushed into his room only to frighten Robin and Krimmy half out of their minds. "Mike!" Krimmy quickly stood up and stared down at the bloodly stained wet Mike. "your arm! what..." He then looked at the Sohee. "... oh no..." he slowly let out his breath. Robin quickly leaped out of his bed and then patted it. "Hurry bring her here.." Mike slowly struttered to the bed and laid the Sohee down on it. The Sohee slowly opened her eyes and then looked up at Mike with pain. her face was filled with a weakining aura. "damn it.. her spirit won't be able to stay in this world too long.. if we don't do something with her .. body or something.." Mike slowly looked about. Krimmy looked down at her wounds and then looked at Robin.
"The Munak's gradmother.. she knows plenty about the undeads in Payon gravesite dosen't she?" Krimmy asked Robin. Robin nodded. "mmm! i think she is in Comodo now though.." Mike quickly lifted himself up as he heard this. "Then ill go find her!" he quickly started twoards the door. But as he approached it he was only greetedby the heavily armored Rahan. "no.. Mike.. look at you your arm is in no condition to meet battles.." He said sternly at Mike. Mike clenched his fist. "Out of my way.. by the command of your Guild Leader!" Mike growled. Rahan shook his face. "Mike please.. think resonable.." rahan said sternly closing his eyes. Mike growled and then quickly used on of his arms and quickly shot it twoards a vurnable spot around the stomach of the Full plate armor. The armor gave a violent crunching sound and Rahan eyes shot opened from pain. Slowly but steadily Rahan fell to the ground holding his stomach. "Ill be fine... i have to help Sohee though.." He then worriedly looked at her on the bed. "Sohee.. just hang in there.." He slowly said.
He then looked at the 3 with his wolven eyes flashing. "watch over her.. if anything happens to her. all 3 of you will DIE..." He warned them sternly and then he took off. Robin held a fist to his chest worriedly. "sohee.. Mike.." He said softly to himself. Krimmy slammed his fist into his other hand and looked straight twoards Rahan. "Damn it.. hes mad..." He slowly growled under his breath. Rahan quickly lifted himself up and then shook his head violently,. "damn it.." He then just sighed. "..That Mike..." He then looked at Krimmy. "I hope you are staying to watch that thing..." He stared at the Sohee. "Cause i have to take care of the kids..". Krimmy nodded and so did Robin. "I guess we will keep the guilds hotel intact for now then.. along with this Sohee.." Krimmy said craking his knuckles. "Even if the Police comes and such.." Rahan then smirked and held up his Rosary up to his face. "I hope the lord will protect you in watching over an undead.." He then kissed the rosary and slowly lifted it twoards the 2 brothers.
End of chapter 9
((w00t w00t i thinks mes got something nice ideas after talking with Rayan and discussing on where this story will go and such. XP I know i won't be able to finish this chapter in this one period of Child Devolpement XP But lets get some of this down right now....))
Thoughts on Chap. 9: .. i dunno what to say.. this marked something horrible in a out-game relationship... it was hard to belive something in-game could effect somones life.. but it did.
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Reader beware. this Chapter is lonnnggggg jacket. i mean Longggggg
(( ::Rubs face:: nyu? Fate-Stay night has good CG art..))
Wake Up Chapter 11
Kurai slowly rose up to Pea and did a small respectful bow. Pea smiled and then did the same hand motion signaling Kurai to Stand up. "So you finished the Chapter right?" Pea smiled. Zero was lazily seating in one of the church chairs as he slowly observered Kurai and Pea. Kurai did a nod of the head and slowly placed his hands in his lap (like every good lil Acoytle boy should). He then looked up to Pea. "Yes Mother Pea.. i have finished the Book of Nikita's rebirth...".
Pea smiled. "then please tell me what you have learned after reading the book...". Kurai slowly took a deep breathe. "this chapter moved me quite well... i never thought of how people could be corrupted with such power and such.." He then slowly looked up at Pea. Pea nodded. "Tell me what happened in the chapter.." She crossed her arms.
Kurai then slowly looked up to Pea and then closed his eyes. "The land of Zenith on which Nikita created was meant to be a paradise for monsters and humans alike. There was always food, always water, and everything everyone wanted. everyone was created to be about the same. There was no leaders or such, everyone just went on with lives and lived with peace of others. If somone found something really good to eat, they would share it with everyone. If somone has come up with something new, they would share it with everyone also.. Everything was perfect like this until Nikita decided that maybe.. maybe he should create a very powerful item.. something to reward his people with. So he created the Zenith Caliber."
"These weapons were to be surpassed any other normal item and is used to become much more powerful then any others. He wanted the people to wear wings just like the monsters and be able to fly around Zenith happily and feel the joy of paradise. He felt as if this would make the monsters and humans more equal. However he didn't know that this caused Zenith's downfall between humans and monsters..." Kurai slowly paused. "The humans greed for the power of the wings and jelousy of monsters brought humans to start to classify monsters as 'different' and such. This started to sepreate the two into groups. Then Nikita felt as if that his people might need a leader. A leader to help all of them come back together and such, he then chose one. This being was neither human nor monster, but somehow a mixture of both. His body was formed into a human shape, but he had monster traits on him as well. This was labled The Master. He was given the most powerful Zenith Caliber and blessings of Nikita. This brought some peace back between humans and monsters."
"but it was not long till The Master become tired of his endless day ruling and enforcing everyones behavior. And so the power corrupted him.. He made a tournament which determined who was the strongest. people began for once see people as greater or weaker then others. They began keeping weapons and supplies for themselves before the battle. After the Tournament The Master took the strongest Humans and Monsters and formed a powerful group called the Elite. And then he began his Randomn massacre of Zenith. Nikita saw thisand quickly stepped into teh battle against The Master. The Master was defeated and for punishment Nikita changed The Master into formless blob of pink. Nikita then destroyed his face and forever sealed him away as a leader to the weakest monsters of all. Porings."
"The strongest Humans were then punished into the form of a Tree called the World Tree. Forever stuck to the Zenith Holding the world together. Forever they are forced to produce the rare fruit Called the Yggdrasilberry, and on occasion create a stone seed called the World Stone." Kurai let out another slow breath. "The Strongest monsters were punished down to the land below called Nadir, where they will forever stay locked into their dungeons. Whenever they die they will always be reborn somewhere else in their dungeons. Nikita thought this woudl have solved everything but thanks to the corruption of The Master, the humans and Monsters could not live in peace anymore and become always judging one another. Nikita angered banished all of them down into the land Below."
"The Humans and monsters were all striken with grief. The land below did not have enough water.. nor did they have enough food for everyone. Everything was obtained through work and such. The humans angered by the monsters felt it was their fault and sepreated themselves from them. Along with the humans. The Humans slowly built up their own society and the monsters followed the legendary punished monsters. Finally Nikita spoke up again. He announced those who were pure enough may be able to reach Zenith with the ancient equipment of Wings. It was a hard and powerful test to both the humans and the monsters. and only very few have succeded. Nikita then bound the people and Monsters down by three spiritual flows. Love, Justice, and Hatred. The Three flows of energy gave peopel a special boost of power whenver they will be locked into battle. So forever then, humans and monsters have been this way." Kurai then slowly let out a long breath.
Pea nodded and slowly wipped her face. "That was excellent Kurai.. I see you have learned a lot from it have you not?" She slowly said. Kurai nodded again. "The land of Zenith.. is really teh land of Nadir... why was i not aware of this.." He slowly sighed. "I feel pained.. as if i have done something wrong for not knowing this.."
((annnddd poo writers block))
((i would like to thank Rahan's story for giving me a lil inspiration to finish this up and also... from the last chapter...
sakura: "decided that some help wouldnt help" sakura: -.- KuraiGekkou: haha sakura: hmph KuraiGekkou: rereading that does sound a bit controversial KuraiGekkou: wait KuraiGekkou: ::rereads it again:: KuraiGekkou: hmm sakura: -.-;;;;;;; KuraiGekkou: oops KuraiGekkou: that didnt come out too rigth.. sakura: yah u dolt
made a lil odd mistake there O-o;; ))
Pea nodded and then placed a hand on Kurai's head. "Don't worry Kurai.." She then slowly offered Kurai a hand up. Kurai took the hand and slowly rose up to Pea. "now Kurai what is your pursit to becoming a Monk?" She asked slowly. Zero just casually kicked his feet up onto the Armrest of the Church benches. Kurai looked up to the stained glass drawings. "I want the power of the monk so i can defeat people like Kitsune to protect my friends..." He quickly made a stern face down at Pea. Pea slowly nodded. "Thats a very noble Reason Kurai... you are obviously much more enlighted and ready to take on the holy job of Monk more responsibily. I offer you my blessings.." She then held up her rosary and then kissed it then held it twoards Kurai.
Kurai smiled and then pumped his arms up. "Lord your spiffy monk has returned!" He cried out. Pea chuckled and Zero just smirked.
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"So that dude finished his Acoylte training that fast?" Majikk was leaning back in a wooden chair. Motoko nodded. "word came from Zero and Pea just a while ago with from their message of the guild Connection service." Motoko then slowly tipped Majikk's chair and Majikk almost toppled over backwards, but somehow with a series of ridicoulous Flapping hand motions Majikk was able to regain the chairs balance. Majikk gave Motoko a nasty stare. "bah... he's still not going to make it through Fudy's training.. no one really can.." She glared down at the ground.
Motoko slowly rose her face up curiously around Majikk. "Is somone's jelouse that my husband will accept somone else as their favorite student now?" She slowly smiled. Majikk quickly snapped back. "What are you talking about!?" She growled and then stood up cracking her knuckles. "its nothing like that!" She then looked walked over to the window and looked out of it.
Motoko just giggled and slowly placed her hands behind her back. "You know somone's going to be better then you sooner or later Majikk... you can't just be one of the few surviving Fudy students who passed his test.. There will be others " She slowly smiled. Majikk just ignored Motoko. She then clenched her fist and frowned. "I know that.. and im well aware of it.. but i want to be.. I am Fudy's student.. and i worked hard to earn his respect.." She then turned about. "I can't just accept a lousy Monk who came over here at Job 40 and just take over Fudy's student rank.. He will have to earn my respect.. before Fudy can train him..." She then slammed her fist together. Its power shook the ground and the air around her. Her hair seemingly was thrown back.
Motoko sighed and shook her head. "young Majikk.. ever so defedant in Fudy's respect hmm? Sometimes i worry about leaving you and Fudy together.. hehe" She smiled and then walked off.
"Wh...what does that mean!?" Majikk yelled out angrily at Motoko, but Motoko didn't answer and just walked off.
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((finish laters X_X)) ((yes thank you for over 1500 views everyone ^^ i hope you enjoy reading this story.. ill try my best to make this story very enjoyable ^^ BTW.. i dunt think you guys want to really write like me.. i dunt do creative writing but i suck in English general writing XD. heheh.. you won't get an A+ trust me XD. Once again here i am in Child Development.. but because I know poor Tale is sick now.. ill just try to write up a little bit for her so she can read this ^^))
Some mores of Chapter 11
Kurai slowly entered the room of the giant guild castle of Suki. HE slowly turned about and stared about the walls. His footsteps echoed across the vast hallway as he stared about in awe of the guilds pictures and giant flags about the area. "Hello?" Kurai's voice echoed across the room as he stepped across a giant plate of armor near him. He then turned about as he came to the center of the huge castle. "HEY! Anybody here?" he yelled out again. "Pea and Zero said that i should just come into the guild! so like.. yeah! i finished my acoylte Training!" He just stood about. the silence was disturbing to him.
A giant metallic footstepped echoed from behind him and Kurai quickly turned about in fear. There the giant plate of armor that was once standing still came alive and two dark yellow eyes formed at the head of it. THe plate of armor stared down at Kurai and raised up its sword. Kurai looked up and then relized he was screwed. "gah.." He then leaped away and the sword came straight down twoards the ground shattering the hard marble floor kicking up some dust. The sword was immense and large and the plate armor itself was of a giants. Kurai stared up at the thing with much fear.
"holy crap.. what is..." He then quickly placed his Claw on and leaped forward at the plate of armor and threw his fist down. "YA!" He yelled out but the armor just shook back a bit before it threw its left fist into Kurai's body knocking him into a nearby wall. "Wha..." Kurai rubbed his chest. "This thing is not a monster.. but nor is human.. what is it.." He then leaped away from anotehr sword.
"Its a castle gurdian" Yelled out a females voice. Kurai turned to the source of the voice and saw a Monk gurl standing on the rail above him of a stair. She was crossing her arms and then she leaped downwards. "Castle Gurdian! this man is allowed in the castle he is allies with us!" She yelled out as she rushed in front of Kurai. The guardian ignored Majikk's cries and swung down his blade again. Majikk growled angrily but quickly threw her hands up catching the blade. "BLADE STOP!" She yelled out and a loud crash of light formed as she stopped the blade directily with her bare hands. a loud crash of metal and Majikk's whole body shook with the struggle between the Castle Guardian and her own body strength. She growled angrily at the Guardian. "Looks like the Castle Guardian's are still a bit bugged up" She said through a struggling voice.
Kurai blinked. "Bugged up? as in.. they are robots?" He said curiously. Majikk quickly turned back to him. "DUH! don't you know anything!? ugg! Come on Kurai! if your going to just come in our guild and activate our Guardians, the least you could do is help us shut them down!" She cried out. Kurai nodded and then quickly pulled back his arms. "RAGING THRUST!" He yelled out and threw out his fist straight twoards the Castle Guardian. The Guardian didn't budge but a loud metallic clang was forced out along wiht sparks flying about off the armor of the Guardian.
Kurai's claw scraped deeply across its armor and then was forced off. Majikk turned to Kurai with a very confused face. "What the hell was that!? Asura strike him already!" She yelled out. Kurai blinked. "a...asur....asura strike?" He blinked as if that word was forgien to him. Majikk tilted her head downwards and sighed. "Your Hopeless! i can't belive Fudy is even letting you to stand before him!" She sighed and then she threw her arm upwards quickly, releaasing the sword. THe castle guardian suprised, was thrown off balance and stumbled backwards. Quickly Majikk threw her fist into the ground. "COME TO ME SPIRITS" She yelle dout and 5 spirits formed around her body and orbited about her body. SHe then quickly ran up to the armor and somehow propelled herself into the air all the way matching up with the Guardian's face.
There she seemingly suspended herself with a powerful battle aura. She took in a deep breath and then all 5 spirits that were around her formed straight into her right fist, Electricity crackled twoards her fist too and then the entire room was filled with an unknown spirit aura. Her eyes turned into a wild fury and she then crashed twoards the ground bringing her fist straight through the guardian. "COMET ASURA !!" She yelled out her voice echoing throughout the hallway and all about Kurai. Kurai stood in awe at the powerful attack. The attack shot straight through the Robotic Golemn. LIke a powerful comet as the name implies crashing through anything. as she landed she produced a powerful shockwave that seemed to give off electricity all around her. Her hair rushed upwards and Kurai's hair blew back. The flags about the wall flapped instensly from the strike. Dust was kicked into the sky and obscured Kurai's vision a bit.
Slowly the dust settled and the electricity gave off their final cries. Majikk was on the ground leaning down with her fist stuck twoards the ground. The Robotic guardian slowly let out a sharp creak and then slowly the upper metallic body slid off the bottom support. then crash to the ground letting out some loud chaos of sounds. Then then bottom part of the robot fell down crashing down also. Majikk stood up and cracked her knuckles and then her neck. "hmph.." She said as she looked at Kurai. "That is just a variation of Asura strike... nothing much really..." She then slowly fixed her hair.
"Majikk!" A voice boomed from across both Kurai and Majikk. Kurai looked up and saw Fudy with Motoko by his side slowly looking down at them from the top of the staircase. "Ahh Fudy!" Kurai quickly kneeled down. "I do hope i do not.." Fudy interrupted Kurai. "Not now Kurai.. i have to deal with my student here.." He then leaped off the top of the staircase, his long monk robe flapped about the wind and then his body landed in front of Kurai. Motoko followed shortly as she held her dress down and land on both feet. Fudy slowly looked at Majikk with some dissapointment. Majikk quickly bowed down before Fudy. "Asura striking in our own guild? what exactly are you trying to accomplish young Majikk?"
Majikk didn't respond she just slowly put on a face of worry. "I thought i taught you better then that..." He slowly muttered and then sighed. "Im very proud of your new varation of the Asura strike, but that dosen't mean you can go off and strike our own robots with it!" He then lifted up his fist and shot it twoards the staircase pointing at it. "Leave my sight..." He growled. Majikk quickly nodded and then walked off, her footsteps was only heard from the long silence as Kurai watched her leave.
Kurai watched Majikk's action, her face was stern and emtionless as if she didn't desearve to talk to Fudy at all. Kurai felt a very strong aura of feelings from her but he couldn't quite grasp a reason why she does so. Does she Fear Fudy? Or does she have so much respect for him that she acts this way? His thoughts was interrupted by Motoko's whispering to Fudy.
"your too harsh on her.." She said. Fudy just rubbed his face. "No... im not.. she will understand its only going to make her stronger this way..." He the sighed and turned to Kurai. "Your back.. i trust that you are now a Job 50 acoylte graduated..." His voice was sharp and demanding. Kurai gave off a nod and bowed again. "Fudy! Please teach me the ways of being the strongest Monk! I pursue strength in order to cleanse the land of Nadir to help the righteous people go to Zenith!" Kurai said it very clean and strong, as if he practiced this saying.
Fudy smiled and then lifted up his hand signilaing Kurai to stand up. "Thats it.. thats the students i look for.. i will gladly teach you Kurai.." he then lifted up his rosary kissed it and then held it twoards Kurai. "You have my blessings..."
Kurai's eyes filled with happiness. he couldnt contain a smile and he let it out. "Father Fudy! I will try my best to learn everything you have to teach!" he yelled out loudly and then took a bow again.
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"So the special today is Cheese sandwhiches huh?" Umbra slowly said as he lifted up the sandwhich about his hands too.
"yeah.." Thanatos said slowly and just sat down outside of Pontera next to Umbra. he slowly pulled down his assasin mask and then took a bite out of the sandwhich. "You know.. it could be heated.." He then turned to a simple blue haired alchemist nearby. "Hey.. you got anything that could heat up a sandwhich Muffin?" He asked curiously
Muffin nodded and then threw out a bottle. "Demostration!" And there a giant flaming pit was produced. Umbra nodded slowly and then tossed his sandwhich on his katar and held it above the flame. "how the hell did they make these cheese sandwhich" he asked Thanatos.
Thanatos just tilted his head. "i think from Peco milk and like.. bread.. or something..." He muttered uninterested.
Umbra then nodded. "you know.." He slowly looked at the sandwhiches cheese starting to drip. "it would taste better.. if we had like.. meat on it.."
Thanatos slowly lifted his head up. "Stop complaning and eat your sandwhich.."
Umbra then slowly lowered his katar out of the flame and took a bite. "cheese sure is sticky together..." he muttered.
Thanatos nodded and slowly chewed.
Umbra then slowly looked up at the sky. "you know.. it reminds me of when peoples skin get sticky..."
Thanatos slowly didnt move but stopped chewing.
Umbra then chuckled to himself "hey.. you know when old people do it? and like try to sepreate?"
Thanatos quickly dropped his sandwhich and turned about to the flower bed and let out a loud reching sound.
end of first part of chapter 11
((Chapter was rather short this time... Old Lady Sandwhiches Copyrighted by Sal XP ))
((psst Richie.. Rene dosen't go to wushu.. Also GO Ep. 8 Aegis!!! it sounds so exciting ^^!!! 7:26-7:35 10-8 min to feed an isis))
Part 2 of Chapter 11
Tale's body was hunched forward and her hair was completely messed up. Her breathing was heavy and all over her body was covered with stings and pieces and juice from the Ancient worms. Her eyes was small and filled with a pure aura of battle and fear. her body shook and slowly she straightened up looking about her the destruction of ancient worms all about her.
Slowly a soft clapping sound came from the behind Tale. Tale quickly turned about and rose her staff up twoards the direction of the sound and produced a glowing fireball at the tip of it. There she litted up the source of sound of the clapping, it was Kitsune slowly raising up his hands. "calm down now Tale..." He said with a smile.
((oops forgot.. had to do something O-o;; ::runs away:: )) ((itll be sooo funny after all that work getting the CDs to Rene and her Computer still dosen't let her connect to the server XP. Happy b-day Knale!! ))
actually doing chap 11 here XP
Tale quickly glared straight at Kitsune but then slowly tears formed in her eyes. Kitsune slowly smirked at her tears and then chuckled. "In Pain Tale? hurt? just feeling unable to take anymore of this?" Kitsune slowly said as the flame from Tale's staff flickered off his face. Tale then slowly broke down and sobbed. She dropped her staff and rushed up to Kitsune burrying her face into him. Kitsune's eyes was filled with suprise and his body shook. He quickly lifted up his blade and threatened to slash Tale with it as if expecting an attack from her.
But instead of attacking Tale, he Froze, slowly allowing Tale to cry onto his small but firm chest. "...your weak..." he whispered and slowly tilted his head downwards to face the sobbing kneeling Tale. Tale just slowly nodded but then began to slowly weakily punch Kitsune's chest. Kitsune allowed it, for some reason he couldn't find himself to attack her. "... Tale.. you made some improvment however.. " He then lifted her off her and looked at her. Her face was completely messy and her eyes were filled with tears. Kitsune just sighed and shook his head.
".... lets go outside and enjoy the sunlight.." He softly said. Tale's face was filled with confusion and just stared straight at Kitsune as if he lost his mind. Kitsune just moved his face away from Tale's suprised face and then pointed at the opening of the roots of the hidden temple, where a leak of sunlight shoned in. "you desearve it anyways Tale.." he said. "SO GET TO it or else you won't get the chance!" He barked. Tale nodded and then quickly lifted up her staff and walked upwards out of the roots.
Tale was slowly leaning back against the Tree and slowly went through her messy hair. She looked horrible with all the guts and cuts on her. She felt so unwomanly but it was the least of her worries. She slowly turned her blue eyes twoards the ground and shuddered. She felt so cold and different. She wasn't normal anymore she relized. She could summon any element flow much quicker even from a damp dark area such as the Hidden tree roots. Suddenly Kitsunes hand was in front of her, and in the hand was a deleciously round shiny apple.
"Eat it.." Kitsune said witha firm voice. Tale blinked and just slowly took it out of his hand and ate it slowly and cautisiouly. It was very refreashing, the freash, organic apple filled with its naturally sweet juice. it rejuvinated Tale seemingly, making her feel so refreashed and back to the lil joys of life. Tale slowly smiled and looked up at Kitsune, she then slowly held the apple against her face and rubbed it against her cheek happily. It was as if a warmth of happiness was brought to her from Kitsune. Kitsune ignored this and then walked out to the field in front of her. He slowly looked up at the sky and then felt a breeze of wind against his face. he then slowly sniffed it. A small smile appeared on his face.
"I think its time for you to realize the power on you now Tale.. here comes a lil road test now..." He smiled and then from the distance came the thundering footsteps and loud barking of a herd of Vagabond wolves. Tale quickly grabbed her staff and held the apple with her teeth. She seemingly didn't want to let go of the lil treat Kitsune gave to her. She then stared straight at the herd and placed on her war face. She then lifted up her staff, suddenly 4 worm shapped figures glowed against her belt. She looked at it confusingly but a sudden wave of lighting was brought from nowhere straight into her staff. She let out a suprised gasp. Never before she could summon up the powers of nature so fast and instantenously. She then seeked the Thunderstorm twoards its target throwing her staff into the ground. Her hair shot up and suddenly a bolt of lightning crashed down upon the herd of wolves. All the wolves fell down their bodies twitching and blue sparks crackled off them. A loud chorus of howls and pains.
But the Vagabond wolf still stood and rushed forward twoards Tale with a pursit of anger. Tale quickly lifted up her staff and threw it forward. Another ball of ligthing. Jupitel thunder. crashed straight into the Vagabond slamming him backwards forcefully. The vagabond tried to force friction upon the ground by grasping and digging his claws straight into the ground. Dust kicked up as he was dragged across the ground, but soon the Ball of lightning took his whole body and dragged him straight off the ground and threw him straight into a nearby tree, shattering it all. Tale stared at the immense power of her instantenous cast with awe. and then slowly looked straight at the broken tree. Slowly the Vagabond stood up again, very weakened his body twitched with wooden splinters all over his body. Tale didn't attack it, as if she felt pity on it.
The vagabond let out a low growl of anger and his teeth bared with anger and his eyes filled with an angry yellow glow. It then leaped twoards Tale, but right before he could land a bite, Kitsune fell from the sky digging his Photon blade straight down into the back of the Vagabonds neck, landing straight on its body. Blood from the wolf splattered all over Tale's face forcing her to blink. and a faint whimper was forced out of the vagabonds mouth as its body was completely crushed and his neck cracked leaving his head into a deformed position. Tale stared straight at Kitsune with fear again.
Kitsune smiled and removed his sword. He then slowly lifted the blade up to his face and licked the blood off. "the blood of a vagabond. Oh how the Hunter flies crave this blood... How do you like your new strength Tale.. think of all the monsters you can kill..the respect you will gain... no longer, you need protection from Rayan. But instead you can show Rayan you are the stronger one.." Kitsune smiled and then stared at Tale. Tale slowly looked down at her staff and smiled. She agreed with Kitsune. Now she was much stronger... and she craved more of it, it made her feel no more weakness was within her, but instead all but pure control. She changed and she let out a small laughter.
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"Gah!!" Mike yelled out and fell twoards the bridges ground. He held his head and shuddered. Sakura quickly stopped and turned around. "hmm? Ahh! Mike! whats wrong?" She let out worringly as she leaned down twoards him curiously. MIke just shook his head. "I dunno.. i just felt some like.. pain from the wolves.. i dunno why.." He then just cleared his throat and lifted himself up with the bridges support rope. Sakura just smiled and then shrugged. "you and your wolves.." She chuckled. "come on! We are almost in comodo now!" She then rushed on ahead again. Mike slowly smiled. "hmm yes.. we are..." He smiled and then quickly raced ahead of her. "Wah! your fast!" Sakura yelled out as she saw Mike just rush on by his feet clanging against the wooden bridge with a constant rythmn.
Sakura quickly picked up her pace and tried to catch up to Mike. "Waiitttt upppp!!!" She yelled out. Mike just smiled as he rushed out of the cave. there he looked about him the wonders of Comodo. Palm trees, a massive beach, Fireworks getting set off, and all the friendly looking huts about him. He couldnt help but to smile from the delicious aroma of meat throught the air. Sakura came a bit later panting heavily from behind Mike. SHe then placed her hands down onto her knees and then let out a long breathe of air. She then saw a firework and quickly shot up looking about her, wahhhhh soo pretty!" She yelled out happily. she then stared at the beach and quickly tossed off her large Rougue jacket. "Beach beach!!!" She yelled out happily and jumped straight into the water.
"wahhh isk soo refreashing.." She sighed contently "isk been a while since i had a soothing bath.." She sighed again and slowly leaned back against the warm sand. MIke slowly smiled and then decided this was a good place to leave Sakura since now he was safe and without the needed 'protection' from her. "Well sakura... tha--" but he was immediatly interuppted by a Sin dropping in front of him. MIke quickly shot backwards with suprise and drew out his light espilion. "NANI!?" He yelled out. The Sin had on a puppy love on his head and his face was seemingly stern. but that immeditaly changed into a huge smile. "WELCOME TO COMODO!!!" He yelled out happily and then threw on him a puppy love over his head. Mike's face was filled with confusion as he watched the sin then rush over to Sakura and lifted her up throwing puppy love over her poring hat. Sakura blinked in confusion. "hmm?" she let out.
The sin then did a lil twirl and dragged Sakura up next to Mike. he then clapped his hands happily. "Another Couple coming to Comodo seeking love! eh!? I welcome you with Open arms and let me and my wife take you on the wonderful journey of love here in Comodo!!" He smiled happily. Mike then turned immediatily red and then facefaulted. "WAHHH!?!? BUT!!!" Sakura clapped her hands happily too just like The sin and smiled. "Awee! this will be so much fun! im Mike's gurlfriend now!" She bounced happily. MIke just stood there looking back at Sakura. "Buttt buttt!" he let out slowly. but was then interrupted by The Sin's hand yanking.
"Come come! we must start planning out your 3 days of love Activities! theres no time to loose!" he smiled happily dragging them both into a hut. Mike quickly tried to protest but he was lost within the confusion. "3!! 3 days!??!" He yelled out.
((Finish this lata)) ((ugg i feel very sick.. i dunno it is because of the immaturity i see sometimes in Zenith which just makes me feel awfully just.. i duno. JUST SICK. ugg. Honestly sometimes when i log onto Zenith and wish to have a good time with my friends, instead i see none of them on and some immature pre-teen bratting off about some items/zeny or such and such. Maybe its cause im just sick physically now.. i killed myself in wushu yesterday. Sword forms are harder to do for some reason. lil kids can tackle me down now... heh.. So ends my lil rant.. i mean no offense to the other mass majority of mature players of Zenith though, i greatly appreciate you guys making the Zenith Community a great one. thatll probably exaplain why i haven't been on Vent for a while and i probably wont be. need some time to wind down from RO or something...I really look forward for some new lands and monsters me and my friends can easily access to and explore though ^^.
Re-edited chap. 11's begning. it was rather messy and just.. un-edited XP))
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