My poetry of death

[JazzyB1]

It Comes From the Dark

Death comes by dreams of suicide
Or so it seems it always hides.
Through the night in shadows as it lurks
You hear its whispers and its quirks.
Which steers the random touch of grim
That nears in light that is so dim.

The touch
The feel
As it passes on
No light is seen
Until you’re gone.

Death comes by
You’re not alone
All you see are
Undead souls in the dark

Goodbye death says
As it leaves
Goodbye it whispers quietly

Goodbye…


- jazzyb1  

[DaisukeOrDark]

Hmmm
Sounds....like every emo song I've heard inthe last 6 months.
Well you didnt whine about an ex.....  

[A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects]

well this is the emo guild. what do you expect  

[ffsghyanbh]

A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects

well this is the emo guild. what do you expect

Just because it's an emo guild doesn't mean we expect you to make carbon-copy trash.

Come on, you guys want to be so unique, how about TRYING for once?  

[emo-ice-cream13]

I think it's great! Poetry is unique no matter if it sounds the same (or at least to me) Don't think I'm weird for thinking that (even if I am) It is a nice way to think instead of constantly judging people. It's not about if it sounds the same as every1 else, it's about how the writer thought when he or she wrote the poem. Great job! You should write more!  

[JazzyB1]

Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream  

[DaisukeOrDark]

JazzyB1

Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream

Your hearts sucks.  

[JazzyB1]

DaisukeOrDark

JazzyB1

Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream

Your hearts sucks.

WTF!!!! Your such a........... emo  

[-Isel-]

JazzyB1

DaisukeOrDark

JazzyB1

Hey I didn't COPY ANYTHING THIS CAME FROM MY FREAKIN" HEART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream evil mad scream

Your hearts sucks.

WTF!!!! Your such a........... emo

If this sucks, and it came from your heart, I'd say his logic is on point.  

[A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects]

Mise en Garde

A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects

well this is the emo guild. what do you expect

Just because it's an emo guild doesn't mean we expect you to make carbon-copy trash.

Come on, you guys want to be so unique, how about TRYING for once?

Emo?!? TRYING?!?!  

[xXxAllThatsLeftxXx]

Isel's a man b***h. We all know that much.