Pills

[UsakoTenshi]

1...2...3...4...5...6...7...8.....9...10...11...12... 12 pills...

I'll save the last two just in case Mom gets a head ache.

I stared at the white pills for what felt like forever. On the warning label it said not to take more than 8 pills per day.

Would I die from this much? Or did I need more?

If I really wanted to die I would have already killed myself...right?...But maybe I'm waiting for something before I die... What about my dreams? My goals? The people I care about? I continued staring at the pills. I started to laugh.. I'm...crazy...I need therapy..Or maybe I think I'm crazy and maybe I just want to be crazy!

What about little Nicky, my sister? What about my dad? I'll be seeing him tomorrow. Do I want to do this to them? What about this...and that...and...?


I sighed and started to put the pills back inside one by one...

12...11...10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2.....1....0....0 pills  

[KirbyVictorious]

Awwwwwwwwww, cool.

That's fantastic.

Great writing, short, though, and good story.

Go you.

Though I would suggest...

"What about this...and that...and..."

instead of the last line in italics.  

[UsakoTenshi]

I'm not quite sure what you mean by that. Put in "What about this...and that...?" for the last line... or...something else?

Sorry, I'm hyper and I'm getting confused really easily  

[KirbyVictorious]

What about this and that?

Replace with:

What about this...and that...and...?

Sounds more thoughtful/  

[UsakoTenshi]

Oh! Ok. Thanks! blaugh  

[KirbyVictorious]

Nice *thumbsup*  

[UsakoTenshi]

Thank joo!  

[KirbyVictorious]

heart heart  

[UsakoTenshi]

blaugh