waste away a song (comments are loved)

[rockrgirl01]

emotains kept inside for such a long time
finally running out of places to hide
doesnt matter if I sream cause you dont hear me


youll never know how it feels when I look into your eyes
and youll never know how it feels to have to hide behind these lies
and youll never know how it feels to wanna waste away waste away waste away tonight

fighting for a chance that I'll never get
Still pretending that I never think of you
in my dreams your still haunting me
makes it impossable to face reality

youll never know how it feels when I look into your eyes
and youll never know how it feels to have to hide behind these lies
and youll never know how it feels to wanna waste away waste away waste away tonight

Still hiding behind these walls
never able to face the truth
In my heart I know I can't forget you

youll never know how it feels when I look into your eyes
and youll never know how it feels to have to hide behind these lies
and youll never know how it feels to wanna waste away waste away waste away tonigh  

[-Isel-]

You'll get a million-dollar recording deal with Fueled By Ramen Records if you write an EP-sized batch of "songs" like that.  

[Hikaru Akumu]

I feel no beat to it. I don't really feel much of anything coming from it.

readjust the stanzas and where it ends and starts.

To me, It's all jumble...  

[[Ashes][is][Ashes]]

This has no structure.