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Vannar

PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 7:57 pm
this is probably my best work so far and wanted to see what you guys thought! thanks!


The Old Aim meets a New Playground

Praying fills the air waves with hopes and dreams for those who have fallen down
Our looks deceive our worst of sins that cloud our judgmental selves
Plagued with doubt, listen to those screaming for help
Their chaotic point of view on tyranny will go against the
2 chalk lines that change with the ebb and flow of dishonesty

Hierarchy blessed with the wine of blood of their enemies
Their voice surrounds the millions who follow them
The martyr takes the form of modern art, twisting and turning in any direction
Hypocrisy disbelieves the way you carry yourself
Throw your thoughts into the careless wind and watch them glow

Is this a big mistake, a Greek tragedy at the wrong pace?
Extensive gothic towers throw off the steadiest armies
Trip, roll, duck for cover
With your blindfold covered in dirt, the choir takes aim at your guilt
Makes sure the shot hits the cross that’s strangling around our necks
Marching believers fall into line, wavering, stealing, and oh so becoming of the future  
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 1:37 am
wow.... thats great..... i mean im spechless...... its short yes but it doesnt have to be long the content makes up for it and more. the few lines you have are so deep so truthful its amazing!!!i dont..... i dont know what to say..... except id simply love it and be most honored if youd allow me to use your poem and turn it into a song with which my band(which is still in the making) and i would gladly play! of course giving you all credit for lyrics. i just.... i just simply love it! hell im in love with it! which is really really weird but oh well! if nothing else id love to play it! its pure beauty.  

blazingwinds


Teentiny Boat

PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 6:21 pm
blazingwinds
wow.... thats great..... i mean im spechless...... its short yes but it doesnt have to be long the content makes up for it and more. the few lines you have are so deep so truthful its amazing!!!i dont..... i dont know what to say..... except id simply love it and be most honored if youd allow me to use your poem and turn it into a song with which my band(which is still in the making) and i would gladly play! of course giving you all credit for lyrics. i just.... i just simply love it! hell im in love with it! which is really really weird but oh well! if nothing else id love to play it! its pure beauty.


thats so awesome that you love the poem... but im totally serious when i say... dont mess with my lyricist/lover! if anyone writes music to these lyrics it will be his band (which includes me and the ByahhMan himself)

but i am so happy you love his poems cause so do we and thats why we are so happy to have him writing and playing for us!

Thank You,
PSA member CJ
Promise Something Always  
PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 9:08 pm
that last post was supposed to be from Aeolus0609 btw.
we're just on my computer so he forgot to sign onto his name.
 

Teentiny Boat


A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects

PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:41 pm
confused  
PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2007 5:18 pm
A.Box.Of.Sharp.Objects
confused

what?  

Vannar

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