Darkness

[sexyninjaangelofdarkness]

Darkness...
is all around us every minute of every day.
has taken over my mind.
has turned my world up dawn and now I cant see a thing.
has taken my life way.

Has...
darkness...
scared you?
taken your life away?
been in your mind for a long time?
haunted your very soul?

Why...
am I scared of darkness and feel so alive at the same time?
is it that we feel so diffrient in darkness then we do in the light?
do undress in darkness and not in the light? are we scared of being seen?
do we feel so alone in light, but so together in darkness?

Darkness....
is all around us every minute of every day.
has...
taken over my mind.
turned my world up dawn and now I cant see a thing.
taken my life way.

Dont...
run away, it will only fallow.
hide it will only find.
be scared it will crush you.
scream for it will hear you.

Darkness...
is all around us every minute of every day.
has taken over my mind.
has turned my world up dawn and now I cant see a thing.
has taken my life way.

What...
do I do?
can I do for it cant hurt me?
can you do so it doesnt find you?
can any of us do?

Darkness...
is all around us every minute of every day.
has taken over my mind.
has turned my world up dawn and now I cant see a thing.
has taken my life way.  

[[Ashes][is][Ashes]]

I already gave you my input, darling. mrgreen  

[Hikaru Akumu]

Myun. It has a pretty good idea to base it around. But the one syllable words throw me off. @_@;;

Maybe group together:

"Has...
darkness..."

"Has...
Taken over my mind"

"Don't...
Run away"

And so forth. The random long verses in the mostly-short-versed-stanzas throw me off too..Break it up a little bit to make short-versed stanzas that are long?[/coor]  

[sh4oran_kun]

...Nice...very nice...great resemblence of the darkness...

...I'll add your poetry to my favs....


...Farewell then, may be we won't meet again...  

[Blue_Mascara]

What does "up dawn" mean?