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islanzadidrottning

PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:36 pm


Hi! This is my first scanned drawing; I've been seriously drawing for a year now. Could you guys give me some critique? Please and thank you!

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r312/islanzadidesalas/scan001001.jpg
PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:06 pm


its good, but the something about the shoulders..ones too high perhaps? The head looks a bit long, you might wanna make it a bit shorter, and it would be great once u start working on the face...if you want to though...the hips seem to be a bit wide...or is that just me? well i hope that helped..and didnt make things worse...well umm..ima stop talking now...

4a5dgfad


islanzadidrottning

PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:55 pm


XxrandumbnessxX
its good, but the something about the shoulders..ones too high perhaps? The head looks a bit long, you might wanna make it a bit shorter, and it would be great once u start working on the face...if you want to though...the hips seem to be a bit wide...or is that just me? well i hope that helped..and didnt make things worse...well umm..ima stop talking now...


Thank you for your comments.......I gave up drawing faces on figure drawings a while ago........and I could distinguishing those lines. She's supposed to have a figure.
PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 5:26 pm


well u just dont get better on anything if u give up, give another go at the face...and yeah i c what u mean about the figure..ok well good luck on anything u might be drawing soon

4a5dgfad


nite elf

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 10:16 am


the way i see it is you just need to refine the details
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 10:07 am


I like the outfit on her and I suggest keep practicing instead of giving up who knows maybe that would be your best part of the picture if you get better 3nodding

fumetsu ookami


KiyoshiKyokai

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:14 am


If you can get this far, it's time to move on to inking/coloring and so forth. It's difficult to judge your skill and its strong/weak points based on this rough sketch alone. Can you show us a more finished work?
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