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The Raining Soul

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:01 am
When you were standing
Just right there
The smell of blood
Filled the air
From my broken heart
The blood poured out
While I fall
And begin to pout
I gave you my heart
But you only broke it
I trusted you
But you dropped it in a pit
Why do you watch me
Happily
When you should be feeling
Some pity
It'll happen to you someday
I might watch
And say hooray
Then you will ask me why
As you begin to cry
I would laugh at you and only say
It happened to me exactly in this way
When I gave you my heart
But you only broke it
I trusted you
But you dropped it in a pit
You watched me
Happily
When you should've felt
Some pity
But it's happening to you now
Then you stupidly asked me how
I said: When you broke it
Someone helped me
Open my eyes and see
That I couldn't trust you
Anymore
Even though
My blood began to pour
It hurt me to say
That it was true
And then my life
Began to turn blue
When I remembered that one time
When you committed that one crime (and)
You watched me
Happily
When you should've felt
Some pity
I couldn't trust you anymore
Even though my blood began to pour
Someone helped me
Open my eyes and see
That I was wrong in
Giving my heart to you
Especially after
What you decided to do
And now I'm leaving you behind
I promise I won't be blind (and)
I'm staying with
The one who helped me
Open my eyes and see
That you couldn't be trusted anymore
Even though my blood began to pour
Now let me go and resist the urge to cry
As I begin my long good bye...  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:59 pm
Empty metaphors and fake feelings, all.  

-Isel-


The Raining Soul

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 6:08 am
Fake feelings? It's all I've felt these past two years...  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:02 am
It reminds me of something, but I can't place it. Oh well. Nice work.  

Silver Wingling


KeEp-My-CaSkEt-ClOsEd !

PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:19 pm
Thats good. I like it^^  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:02 pm
Thanks...  

The Raining Soul

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