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 Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 1:59 pm
Sailboat
A boat sails on the horizon
Its snow white sails flapping in the wind
Its course already set
A sailboat in its way
Flowers
Flowers dancing gently with the wind
Swaying back and forth to silent music
Ocean
Sparkling Ocean
Leaping dolphins
Blue sky
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 3:34 pm
You'd be really good at haiku. And Tak's 100 themes deal.
Might wanna give 'em both a try...the first one's fun, dunno about the second.
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 8:16 pm
Well keep putting bunches of words together, 'cause you ain't that bad wink
Actually, I think we have a poetry forum for this stuff, but I don't know if anyone goes in there anymore so I'll leave it out here. I'm starting to realize I don't visit anything besides the Main forum, the Spam forum, and the Book/Writing Discussion forum. Bad mod, bad...
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 3:30 am
Rather lovely poetry, my dear! I particularly like the first one.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 9:35 am
You are a bad mod Hawk.. If you say soemthing like that make sure your Super doesnt see it! tisk tisk.
People still do visit the poetry form m'dear. And I will have to move this there, but if ya would just tell me you have seen this I shall.
But you are very good at putting things together, so if you are up for a challenge, Try out my Project. It is in the Contest forum called 100 themes.
But be warned.. I have been working on it for over a year now.. (was a year on June 6th) and I am only on 88.
Oh, and Welcome!
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 9:54 am
Hawk has a point, Tak. I don't know why no one visits the poetry forum, but if they do no one comments on anything. And I'm being kind of a hypocrite...I stopped commenting too. Probably biterness that some of my best poems went unread.
You know something? I have never been to the RPing forum. Ever. Weird, huh?
Anyway...you'd be very good at 100 themes, and it's great for the subject-deprived writer, the writer with writer's block, and those with ADD. ><
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 11:04 am
You have too. You randomly popped up in the middle asking what a roleplay was.. then never came back.
But leaving this place unorganized it not going to fix anything. Everyone complains you want this place to be more active.. Well dammit start commenting forreal! No more just randomly spamming.. Go around and comment.
This is not a chatter community.. It is a Famnily of Writers.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 12:11 pm
The Lights of Seoul Sailboat A boat sails on the horizon Its snow white sails flapping in the wind Its course already set A sailboat in its way Flowers Flowers dancing gently with the wind Swaying back and forth to silent music Ocean Sparkling Ocean Leaping dolphins Blue sky What an elegant display of simplicity ^_^ I really enjoyed these.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:50 pm
Now, now, Takky, you learn more about people through aimless conversation than writing and critique. And us being a family means us knowing each other well, because that's what we do.
Though critiquing is something I heavily support, because if you don't tell someone that you read their story they'll be sad and disencouraged from writing any more. ):
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:01 pm
KirbyVictorious Now, now, Takky, you learn more about people through aimless conversation than writing and critique. And us being a family means us knowing each other well, because that's what we do. Though critiquing is something I heavily support, because if you don't tell someone that you read their story they'll be sad and disencouraged from writing any more. ): I disagree kribs. You may learn a lot from "aimless conversation" but you can still learn just as much, if not more, from how the person your talking to tells his or her story. Indeed, you may not feel it necessary to disclose your inner state of being to a person in the normal confounds of idle chit chat; but when your writing something, you have to dig deep within your personal experiences to weld together viable representations of the real world. Your characters, descriptions, and attention to different aspects of a story, can all reveal specific aspects of your inner self.
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:53 pm
You stole my thoughts Nova.
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 6:31 pm
Tak-Jak You stole my thoughts Nova. Ill take that as a compliment Tak-jak. ^_^
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