'Why I Was Born' my poem thing...yeah

[KeEp-My-CaSkEt-ClOsEd !]

A Life Without Love,
Its Better To Die.
Some Keep You This Way,
They'd Hate To See You Cry.
And When You Know,
That He Is Lying
Your In Your Room,
Sitting There
Crying.
Mascera Is Running
Eyeliner Is Worn
You Say To Yourself
"Why Was I Born?"
Then The One Comes In
Oh,Look At Him Know
Knowing He'll End Up
Dissembowled
For Breaking Your Heart.
Dont Say Its Not True.
But Someones In Their Room
Just Like You.
Crying The Night Away
Eyeliner Is Worn
You Hold Him And Say
"Your Why I Was Born"  

[A Kiss Goodbye]

Pretty cliche. Your razor doesn't really have much to do with this.

I don't really get why he ends up disemboweled. Also, it isn't good to speak directly to the reader in your poetry. I'm referencing here the lines "But someone's in their room/Just like you".  

[KeEp-My-CaSkEt-ClOsEd !]

Well, i wrote this FOR a friend. So, thats why spoke directly to the reader. And Dissebowled coms from my friends telling all my boyfriends that i've had that if they hurt me in any way they will rip off his arms and legs, gouge out his eyes and make him eat them and lastly cut off his "Manleyness"  

[KeEp-My-CaSkEt-ClOsEd !]

crying
Noone likeths meh poem ~~~~  

[e x m o t i o n a l]

*sigh* you make yourself very difficult to read. The constant capitalization, it's hard to read properly. Dear don't bring your razor into this, it's not a part of the poem.  

[TheDarkNightElf]

i liked it, and i think i get it. i think you need to work on somethings in it, but its great! good job! 3nodding and i know what its like to cry myself to sleep at night. i do say "Why Was I Born?" but not every much anymore.
anyways good job,
love,

-TheDarkNightElf