~ Asterisks (*) will appear before words that I'll explain at the end of the entry. If I fail to explain one, please tell me.
~ (') Are thoughts when used like quotation marks. Ex. 'Gotta get home soon.' No other character hears it.
~ (`) Will be used to denote whispers.
~ Double Asterisks (*.......*) Will occur around sentences that I feel need an explaination. again this will occur at the end.
Cain
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--you better remember what you've read so far....I'm not doing the stupid summary. stare --
He pour this into her mind, hoping she'd heed what he knew. She took several steps from the door, each unsteady as fear washed over her like a weighted net. All his efforts failed as she turned and ran, leaving him sitting in horror. Cain could hear their twisted, drunken laughter as they jogged after her. They had their prize. 'No...No!'
It only took a fraction of a second for Cain to slide out the door. His horror had melted revealing unbridled fury. As far as he was concerned, he'd lead her to a place normal people didn't belong in. He would not let the street trash have her because of his mistake. They would be easy to follow. Alcohol burned thick in the air where ever they passed. Cain flew towards them, his feet barely touching the ground. He began to close in on his quarry.
"Back off!" Marie had been herded into a corner. 'Stupid alley...three walls. One way out that's block with these thugs. I'd never be able to slip through them.' Her mind was reeling. What was she going to do? She knew she didn't stand a chance. 'A scream?' She could hear the bustle of town just a bit away. 'No. It'd be lost in the noise of this city.' She closed her eyes as she heard them slowly advance towards her, whistling quietly and throwing twisted laughs down towards her.
She cringed as one grabbed her wrist. "Come on girlie. We just wanna play." The last word brought on a chorus of laughter and whistles that were no longer merely hinted at,but thrust into the open without fear of detection.'The end. I'm dead.'
A snarl broke above them, more like the call of a wild beast than that of a man. Cain stormed through the grouping, tossing grown men like leaves in the wind. He tore through what he saw as trash and pulled the poor fool from her wrist, throwing him into the astounded group. He clasped her wrist and pulled her to a sheltered corner behind a dumpter while the men were still stunned. "Sit." Marie did as she was told, eyes still shut and believing she was still under the gang's charge. "Beat it." Cain commanded, fully knowing they would do just the opposite.
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Explainations:
*I can't see anything that needs explaining at the moment. Please tell me if you're missing something that I need to explain.
 Tsume Rokaro · Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 05:28am · 1 Comments |
