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The Ghost of Sanatara creek
Theres been legends of a ghost in the creek behind my house. So you want to hear the story i was told? Well me and my two friends Layla and Alyssa wher spending the night and then my grandpa told us the story. It go's like htis. There wher two huntershunting in the creek at night and then the ghost appeared with his scared face and bones sticking out of his side ad blood on his scythe and dagger. The two hunters new a bullet wouldnt affect him so oneo f the hunters found two swords and a dagger by a near by bush. He tried his best to protect him self and his friend but it was no sue the ghost killed him before he could even pick up the dagger. He's friend climbed a tree hoping he would be safe but it was no use teh ghost just floated up to the limb he was on and stabbed him through his body with the dagger. That was the story we heard. Im Cameron and Alyssa me and Layla wernt superstious. Layla was 15 elbow length black hair she was skinny to adn se did have a bf. Alyssa is 11 she has jsut slightly shorter hair then Layla and her hair was blonde and she was skinny to. I am 10 skinny liek them neck length curly blonde hair. Layla said lets go through the woods tommorow night we both agreed. Alyssa said we should get fire would first for tommorow night. So we did and as we got home it turned dark i got up to get a drink and Layla was in the rom with Alyssa i was by my self by the the woods edge. But anyways Layla gto up and told me that secretly Alyssa has crush on me. So when i gto back to my room i looked out the window and thoguth i saw a dead body walking through the woods. I rbed my eyes ad it was still there. Oh and part of the legend is that the bodies killed by the ghost cant go otu of the woods. Well we all three ahte watching te news so did our parents. But finnaly the night came we went into the woods and as we passed a tree we looked up and saw a dead body in the tree Alyssa and Layla said it was fake but i didnt tell them that it was real i saw the blood dripping. So we got the fire started asnd suddnely a rustling in the bushes cmae from behind us. Layla went and through a rock at hte bush then a dead figure with two swords and a dagger came out. We ran into a shed and heard moning and Layla said it souded like her bf in pain. She said that her bf is a hunter nad hunts in theses creeks. Then the door slamemd open and the dead figure came in but then the dead body of Layla's bf stopped it just in time for us to escape. Then we saw the ghost he was in the middle of our path. No one knew how he died. But we rn trough a clearing and we came back on the path but then Alyssa tripped i rushed back to pik her up she fainted so i put her on my sholders and we ran out but then Layla trippedo ver a root i couldnt help her and then the ghost slashed her in to three diffrent pieces i tried to forget it btu then i tripped over a root at hte end of the path and alyssa fell at the froest edge so she was safe but me i gto up as fast as i could andd ran to the edge of the forest and we i stepped at the forest edge the ghost dissapeared. When Alyssa woke up she told me something i could never forget. She sadi I love you. I repled saying i love you too and she kissed me and then suddenly i frogot all about the ghost and when we got older we got married adn ahd children they went through the smae thing ad survived. In a way it even work out for Layla seh gto to die in piece and got to be with her bf. And thats the story of Sanatara Creek.

lI Uke lI
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  • User Comments: [4]
    Hatori_Nara_x3
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    Wed Jul 18, 2007 @ 03:50pm


    : D i know SandSon in real life, i call him Raishi, he told this 2 meh in real life, @ night, itz creepy but i rly luved eht, it wuz a perfect mix of horror 'n luv 'n adventure
    XD


    lI Uke lI
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    Wed Jul 18, 2007 @ 03:51pm


    hmm la di da di da comment fro gold =O


    HyperFoxyWolf
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    Wed Jul 18, 2007 @ 07:58pm


    I love the story<3But not as much as I love you:O


    colorblue52
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    Mon Aug 06, 2007 @ 09:31pm


    wow..nice story!


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