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A/n: After four chapters, you guys SHOULD understand how I write things for the hikaris and yamis, along with the sound effects. Example: -WHACK- whacks people for NOT reviewing and helping me get better at this because I’m an armature

I am going to rewrite this for the sake of you guys… T.T Well, maybe it’ll be better then last time… I put a lot of details for Shizuka’s dress. XD I’ll post up the dress descriptions once my laptop is fixed and you guys can compare how different it is. Please excuse the misakes and small letters, I couldn't save it in word and had to write it in a document I put on here. This really isn't a chapter, but deal with it. Excuse my sappy try for romance. This seems long from my point of view...

Chapter 5: The Dance/Shopping Spree

Yugi smirked. She spotted the perfect dress for Shizuka and forced it into the little girls arms. Shizuka began to protest once she saw the price tag on the dress, but Yugi pushed her into the dressing room and forced her into the dress.

The dress was a button dress in the front with a nice little cut and curve hugging (which Shizuka was tempted to sow the ‘nice’ little cut in the front, mind you, it was a very deep cut. XD), it was a light blue with a dark blue pattern of butterflies on it. It came to her knees and came with a pair of jean shorts. The high heels were actually white boots with a butterfly on the side with some fringe on it. For the accessories, Yugi gave her a nice blue and green ribbon to tie her hair with. Kinda plain, but simply beautiful.

Shizuka turned to Yugi and gave a suggesting eye. "I plan on surprising everyone, you'll see the dress at the dance." Yugi smiled and paid for the dress. "Besides, let's shop some more! I know that you live with your brother who can't even earn a penny and can't afford nice clothes very often! My treat!" And so, Serenity was pulled into the terror world of money wasting and long walking/carrying heavy bags of the place called shopping. In the Yami's Chibi vision, he saw Chibi-Yugi dragging a Chibi-Shizuka with a dog collat around her neck.Chibi-Shizuka tried hanging onto things to aviod going into a longerine store. Chuckling, Yami went back to dressing his own real looking doll Yugi ,that was imagined to press it's body onto Yami without protesting about it, in the skimpy longerine. If Yugi had been in his soul room, Yami wouldn't hear the end of it. Yami's nose dripped with blood as the doll pressed his face onto it's breasts. (I wanted to make Yami pervented for once in this story)

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While Shizuka was in a dressing room changing, Yugi called Ryou and Malik up, it turned into a video message/call. "So! Did you guys manage to pull him away from his laptop? The iceberg."

Yugi heard some strangled sounds on the other end with the screen disorintainted with what seemed to be Ryou's hand covering the screen ,running with Malik, an enraged Kaiba in the background chasing them. "... AH!!!!!! NO, GODS NO, DON'T KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!"

"Um... What the heck was that?" Yugi raised an eyebrow to Yami who had come out and was hanging from her neck. Shizuka peeked out and asked her: "Yugi! What is that? Who's makin all that noise?" Yugi shooed her off and told her to keep on trying on the clothes. Ryou's nervous and terrified face appeared on the sceern with the background of what appeared to be an alley they were in.Ryou's nervous and terrified face came up on screen with what appeared to be an alleyway in the background.

"Hi Yugi, as you can see -glances behind to see if Kaiba is behind them- we had to take drastic measures. We took his laptop."

Yugi and Yami cracked up. "YOU guys took his laptop? How'd you manage to do that?!" Yami gave Yugi a peck on the cheek and winked good luck to Ryou, who had turned to see Kaiba glaring full force at him. Ryou and Malik made a move to leave after dropping the phone onto Kaiba's hands. But, unfortunetly, luck was not on their side. Roland, Kaiba's driver and left hand man, cracked his knuckles with rope around his arm.

Ryou and Malik turned to eachother and cried out: "MOMMY!!!!!!!!!!"

They shivered and meeped with anime stlye crying. Roland cackled and got ready to knock them out.

Kaiba glared at Yugi through the phone and was about to speak when Yugi hanged after saying: "Kaiba-Tan! Meet me at Domino Clock Tower later! Ja ne!"

Yami gave Yugi a short kiss on the lips and whispered later, as Shizuka came out after paying for the clothes with the money Yugi gave her.

"Zuka-Chan, do you want to get something to eat? Ice cream, perhaps?" Yugi counted in her head as Shizuka began to comperhend her words.

'3'

Shizuka bit her lip.

'2'

"Umm... Are you sure?" Shizuka tried to hold her excitment. You see, Zuka-Chan here, LOVES and I mean LOVES ice cream that she eats 4 scoops and doesn't get fat. I know where she probally puts it all, it goes straight to her- (chibi Yugi comes into Yami's soul room with a spiked mallet) Yugi!? Um, Kitten, wha- what are you going to do with that mallet? NO! I didn't mean that! Of course not! AHHH!!!!!!!!!

YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT HER CURVES! WHY I OUTTA WRING YOUR NECK FOR THAT COMMENT!!!!!

And so, imagine a chibi form of Yami all beat up and knocked out with swirly eyes and a HUGE bump on his head. Also imagine red lipstick on his cheek.

'1'

"You sure?"

Yugi nodded and had a hyper Shizuka pulling her out to Domino Clock Tower, where the ice cream shop was located.

As soon as Shizuka got into line, Yugi told her she'd be right back.

Yugi ran into a random bush, not knowing that a beat up Ryou and Malik enrangned with pure anger were right behind her, hidden in a tree. But, as they tried to surprise her, Yami alerted her about them.

"You guys just shut up and watch Zuka-Chan and Kaiba-Kun."

-Shizuka View-

'Oh shoot! I'm not even in my best clothes! I haven't even put on makeup and I'm eating ice cream!' Shizuka panic turned into a hysterical in her mind, while Kaiba walked her way.

"Have you seen Yugi?" Kaiba tried to control his growing blush, Shizuka on the other hand was panicing. Shizuka snapped back to reality when a her little chibi versions of herself angle and devil appeared on her shoulders and whacked her.

"Um... Yeah, I was with her shopping just now. Speaking of which, she should be back from the bathroom."

'Great... I bet Yugi set me up for this, but I don't have time for a girlfriend when I have a company to run.'

Kaiba noticed that Shizuka had ice cream on cheek and told her, when she was about to wipe it off, Kaiba took his guts and licked it off.

They both turned away, beet red. After what seemed like ages, Kaiba spoke up.

"I'm sorry about licking the ice cream off." When Shizuka didn't answer, Kaiba tried to tell her that he liked her when Shizuka wrapped her arms around his neck on her toes. She forced him into a deep soft nervous kiss. Kaiba was shocked for a moment, but soon deepened the intoxicating kiss even more by wrapping his arms around her waist. Passbyers 'awwed' and cooed at their kiss, while little kids stared at them in wonder. Yugi went all fangirlish and babbled onto poor Malik and Ryou about how they should've been girlfriend much ealier. Bakura and Marik ,despite having their soul rooms shut down close, moaned and banged their heads onto a wall. They unfortunetly faced the demise of the LONG babbles of talks from Yugi that seemed to go on forever. Bakura was tempted to force control of Ryou's body and take a dagger and kill Yugi.

They pulled away from eachother for a moment to catch their breath. Kaiba coughed and asked Shizuka if she would be his girlfriend. That was answered with Shizuka's eyes full of love and another deeper then the previous kiss. Kaiba hugged Shizuka closer to himself and squeezed her butt. Shizuka surprisingly didn't mind but instead squeezed his butt back. Shocker for Kaiba, but quickly over came it too and laid his hands firmly on her butt. Shizuka intangled her hands in his brown hair, bringing the sweet kiss deeper.


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Yugi cooed and babbled how cute that and sweet the scence was, she loved it so much that she went into Yami's soul room to find the doll her in the skimpy loungerine pressing it's body onto Yami.
"..."

Yami turned around to see Yugi slowly getting angry.

"I CAN EXPLAIN!!!!!!! WAHH!!!!!!! DON'T KILL ME!!!!!!!!" Yugi brandished her huge hammer at him and whacked him.

"BAKAYARO! IF YOU REALLY WANTED ME TO PAY ATTENTION TO YOU, THEN TELL ME, NOT MAKE A DOLL OF ME TO PRESS IT'S BODY ON YOU!!!!!!!!!!!" Yugi turned off the switch on the doll that was on it's neck and took her hammer and smashed it. Yugi herself planted a peck on his forehead.

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o.O A/n: I think this is enough... Well it's a Cliffle, write more later. This is only a little test chapter if I'm good at romance. o.o Seems long... I am now crazed about anything related to .hack//

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    Ichigo Mew 1
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    Sun Sep 23, 2007 @ 11:13am


    he he got to love your stories! can't wait for more!
    WELL DONE


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