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I feel something cold inside me everything is a blurr i feel pain i see red everywhere theres a shadow in the corner who is it i cant move i smell blood what happened im so dizzy im so weak my hand is covered with blood im on the ground my voice i cant speak lights all these lights am i... no i cant be this isnt happening ive been shot

Posted by: pikachu062191 Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 08:30pm

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Commented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 08:44pm


	Thats deep man! 3nodding is this poem about a person in a hit n' run accident?? xd Am I right? am I wrong what?? Lourelahi, you have become a great poet like Hannah. 3nodding . you make me proud, And Publish these poems!! xd xd Kayla!

Commented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 08:45pm


	some1 broke in ang shot the person

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Commented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 09:12pm


	so I was almost right xd oh well . . . . . blaugh

Commented on: Wed Jun 15, 2005 @ 06:44am


	i like it. it gives people this feeling that they are thinkin the exact thing as the person in your writing. ninja actually im not sure sweatdrop i did like it though

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Commented on: Wed Jun 15, 2005 @ 04:28pm


	sweatdrop its not all that good sweatdrop

Commented on: Mon Jun 20, 2005 @ 08:43pm


	i'm so proud of you louri! crying biggrin xd thats really good, you should get them published like kayla said 3nodding

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Commented on: Tue Jun 28, 2005 @ 04:02am


	BRITT KAYLA DID YOU HAVE TO SAY MY NAME???

Commented on: Wed Jun 29, 2005 @ 07:09am


	yes they did and i thank them whee xd xd i win twisted

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Commented on: Thu Jul 21, 2005 @ 07:32pm

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