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A Girl, Her Dog and A Vampire.
Chapter 4. The Key.

I quickly grabbed the key and shoved it in my pocket.
Okay now to get out of here.
I stood there for a minute and stared at the wall.
Where the heck is a door?
Suddenly I spotted a small door.
I stood there looking puzzled.
Whatever, it was a door.
I quickly opened it and flew out the door and into water.
I swam up to the surface gasping for air.
I saw I missed the steps that lead into the water.
Oops.
I swam to the shore and layed there tired.
It's almost sunset, I thought and sat up.
I wounder how I'm going to find him.
"Look behind you." A voice whispered in my ear.
It made me jump and I twirled around, staring at Henry, Max, Mom and a little girl.
The girl looked about 8.
She could nearly dround in Henry's muscles.
His hand was over her mouth, while the other was holding a knife to her neck.
I could tell she was scared, her trembling body and tears, were no surpirse.
"Did you bring what I wanted?" He asked.
"Yes."
"Where is it then?" He was impaient.
"Right here!" I said and searched my pocket for the key.
Nothing was there.
No! Crap! It must have fallen out when I tripped into the water.
"Well?" Henry tapped his foot.
"Umm...hold on! Don't move I'll be right back!" I said and swam back into the water.
I held my breath and dunked my head under.
I could see it!
A sparkling key.
I grabbed it and Swam back up to the surface, but when I went up, someone was holding my head down in the water.
I spashed and splashed, but the hand didn't remove from my head.
My air supply was running low and I needed to give the key to Henry before it was too...
My thoughts were inturruped by bubbles.
Then before I could slip into unconsiousness someone grabbed me.
I gasped for air and saw Henry.
He chuckled and grabbed the key from me and dragged me to shore.
I choked on the water.
The little girl looked at me in horror.
"See little girl, this is what happends when you dont listen to me!"
The girl just stared at me.
I coughed up a mixture of blood and tears.
"Now, sence I got the key. It's time to say good bye. Hold Max down!"
Mom held Max down as he barked.
Henry came closer to me and grabbed my shirt collar.
He punched my face and I just dangled there.
My heart skipped a beat and I coughed up more blood and tears.
He threw me on the ground.
I landed with a thud.
He kicked me until I was numb.
Henry stoped and looked at the girl.
She was shaking.
Max was still barking.
I was dying.

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  • User Comments: [1]
    hunterbabie13
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    Tue Feb 26, 2008 @ 10:28pm


    ohh thats sad!!!! poor Max has to suffer watching and losing his owner! AWWWW crying


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