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I'm not waiting anymore.
I'll stand and guard my grave.
Until enernity reigns.
This pain is just too much,
Falling like torrential rains of battle nights.
Angels fall with broken wings,
And demons cringe before blood-red lights.
I will scream into the wind
That all my pain will end...
But for now
Right now
I'm not waiting anymore.
I'll stand and guard my grave,
Until eternity reigns.
This pain is just too real.
Why is that all I feel?!
This sweet serentity?
Angels fall with broken wings.
What is this blood soaked thing?
Are those my wings,
Hanging from a blood-fed tree?
Right now...
This pain is just too much,
Falling like torrential rains of battle nights.
Angels fall with broken wings,
And demons cringe before blood-red lights.
I will scream into the wind
That all my pain will end.
I'm not waiting anymore.
I will stand and guard my grave
Until eternity ends.

Tsume 3-5-08


Tsume Rokaro
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  • User Comments: [1]
    Rowan_Wulfram
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    Thu Mar 06, 2008 @ 03:57am


    *applauds* Me much like, sister! Not really wanting to use techy-word, but great use of anaphoras! The repeating phrases gave it a really powerful feel. I especially like the line, "are those my wings, hanging from a blood fed tree?" I love it love it love it!

    Thanks for the heads up, defianately notify me when your ronin poet muse wanders through again. ^^ (we should give him a name!)


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