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So, recently, through the madness that is my brain, I've been thinking of a story...Not one of those short stories that you can just read in about an hour.I'm talking few hours, maybe even days, and several books type of story.I'll put down what I've come up with so far...Also, Titles would be liked...I can't come up with one.


The sun was low in the sky.The sky was changing from blue to orange, yet things seemed to stand still.The Orange only went over half of the sky, Blue covering the rest.And in the middle of these two, in a field of green, covered in the crimson of men, stood two people.
A man and a woman, equaly matched. The woman stood on the side of the orange sky, her blade black as the Abyss.The man stood opposite her, his blade clear and pure.These two blades crashed against each other, extensions of the mand and woman, glaring angrily at each other.
"Why don't you just give up, Jyun?"The woman asked the man, putting both of their blades in a deadlock."You know you can never, and will never, be able to defeat me!The night will come, and so will your doom!"She hissed, her eyes blood red.
"Because..." Jyun said calmly looking at her."I'm not a fool, as most men would be in my situation."He said, his blue eyes glinting in the sun's light."I won't give in to such a...Piece of work, as you, Kyu'Aton."
She screamed in anger, and pushed his blade away, quickly swinging her blade at his ribs.His blade came down, and caught hers, easily pushing it away.His blade swept up, reaching for her neck.Her body fell backwards, dodging the killing blow.She kept falling backwards, bringing her legs up.Jyun got kicked in the face and sent flying a few feet from the blow.

(more to be added)