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The story of Kage (Read it and criticise!)
I thought, what the hell, may as well have a story for what happened to Trey.
Here it goes!

The five Ninja sat inside of the earth temple, the great shadow mass lying in the middle of them, kunai, swords, and chains protruding from it's body. One of the ninja sighed and stood. This ninja, with his jet black hair and eyes was named Aki, also Vice-Captain of the Anbu. He looked at the other four ninja, which included Kale, still just a jounin. "Are we ready to begin?" He asked, a bit unsure of himself.They all nodded.Aki sighed once again and the all stood. They put their hands over the giant shadow beast. The circle the beast was on lit up a pale blue and it let out a blood-curdling screech. They started chanting, the beast trying to escape but unable to, it's legs pinned to the ground by kunai. Villagers far off heard the screams of the beast and quickly went into their houses. As the cries died down, the circle gradually lost the pale blue hue. The monster, now wheezing, lay against the cold ground, probably asking for death right at that time. The circle gave on giant blast of the pale blue hue and the beast let out one more scream, before falling to the ground, dead. Kale and the other ninja covered their noses. "Ugh," She began, her right eye returning from it's demonic state back to it's normal gray human eye, "It already smells of a rotting corpse.." Aki nodded. He was getting too old for this, and he could tell by how long it had taken. "Yes, but, Kage will never bother anyone ever again." They exited the temple, Kale rolling her eyes. "Sure."

At that exact time, three children were playing up in the mountains, their ages were 5, 3, and 7. One of them, the 5 year old, Trey, was showing that he was brave by going to the edge of the cliff and looking over the 50 foot drop into a shallow stream. His bright green eyes sparkled with the enthusiasm only a five year old could have. He kept looking, when he heard a screech from the temple. At that exact time, a rock had slipped from under his hand, sending him tumbling into the stream below, his screams blending in with the inhuman screeches. The two others quickly ran down to the village, calling for their mothers and telling them what'd happened. Trey hit the shallows water, his back and neck hitting against rocks, killing him slowly for some reason. As his near lifeless body lay there, yearning for the light, the shadow beast, Kage, had just died. His spirit now roamed, not wanting to return to the old body it once inhabited. It then came upon Trey. Trey, near death, was able to see almost everything in a new way. He saw the poor lone spirit. Kage, seeing this as a chance to have a new body, entered Trey's already weakened body. As he did, Trey yelled, his broken bones healing instantly. Kage, now noticing the boys ability to keep control tried exiting the body but something wouldn't let him. Trey's eye, once sparkling green, now turned into a demonic red and his skin, once a beautiful kind of pale, turned a tannish color. He then became unconscious. At that time, Kale, returning from her mission, found him. She quickly went and picked him up, taking him to her house. He slept for five days. On the fifth day he awoke, looking around. He now noticed everything was more sharper, clear, and he was able to hear things, things that he couldn't hear before. Kale came in and looked at Trey, noticing the devilish red eyes. After spending some time with Trey, she came to find out that (through the power he was giving off) that Kage inhabited his body. Also, that he had no memory of anything, except his name and age.
































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Dodeva_dragon_shinobi
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commentCommented on: Tue May 13, 2008 @ 11:33pm
since i was there when you first made this up, i must say that this has become really good. Now I'm more interested in what story you have for "The Demon" Kale. lol. It's good.


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