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Angel vs. Devil
Angel vs Devil

"Do it,she wont know,like they say what she dont know wont kill her"the devil said as he appeared outta flames

"Dont do it,u dont wanna hurt her right,u dont wanna see her cry ever dont u love her?"Angel asked as he hovered above ground

"i-i-i dont know what to do" the man says to himself as he looks at the woman infront of him giving him lustful looks and bitting her lip while useing her finger to make him come over

"OH MY look at those titts,man just hit it quit it and forget it"

"SHUT THE HELL UP,oh forgive me lord,u dont wanna do this think of the consequences to this,the one u love is waiting u cant leave her alone waiting at night for this woman who u ment in the lobby"

"he can do what the hell he wants"-devil turns to the man-"go on boy give her what she wants"

"maybe i shouldnt my gf is waiting for me so y should i mess with her"

"because my friend"-devil leans in close-"she has experience" he says as hes pointing

"just cause she has experence doesnt mean anything,she could give u the gift that keeps on giving"angel replys as he lands infront of the two

the man can only faintly hear the angel talking to him now because the devil has gotten to him and he smiles as he walks over to the woman while sayin "shell be fine ill call her and say i had to work late",he then walks in the womans hotel room

The angel crys one tear and whispers" y "while flying away to see the mans gf looking out into the horizen on the beach by herself and gently holds her and whispers "go home dear its getting late",she stands up with a slightly sad look and returns to her home

"Thats meh boy" the devil says as he walks over and slaps angel on the back

"GET UR HANDS OFF ME,AND Y DID U MAKE HIM DO THAT"

"u should know by now,i made him do nothing it was his choice i influenced is all just like u influence" he said as he disappeared in flames

"i guess ur right but know this young man mistakes r made but can never be changed",he then spread his wings and returned to the heavens

The next morning a paino ringtone rings on the phone of the man he pushes the woman off of him and looks at the caller and his eyes go wide as he looks behind him to see that he is not where he is supossed to be and then in a haste picks up the phone "hello" he says in a nervous tone

"hi,baby its me,what happened i thought we were meeting for our anniversery"

The man feels sick as he covers his mouth to stop himself from throwing up"babe im so so sorry i-"

"Who's that you talking to huh?"the woman says behind him

"WTF,ARE YOU CHEATING ON ME,I THOUGHT U WERE THE ONE BUT I SEE THAT IT ISNT TRUE AND AFTER TWO YEARS,I HOPE U ENJOY"his gf yelled before a horrible click was heard along with the sound of his heart dropping

"baby"he says as he slowly stands and gathers his cloths and walks from the room leaving the woman behind him in shock

ENDING 2(hehe im not gonna let it end that way)

"go on boy hit it then quit it and forget it" the devil said

"Its ur anniversery" angel whispered with sadness in his voice before looking down

the man looked at the time and then the lady and glared at the devil"you get the ******** outta my damn ear"he then turned to the lady"stop cause you look like u have a d**k hiddin behind ur skirt and is that herpes i see on ur lip,im not sorry but i have a beautiful woman who i plan to marry waiting for me at the beach"he said as he brushed the devils hand from his shoulder and turned giving a thumbs up to angel and running out of the hotel door

"DAMMIT" the devil said in a rage "WTF I ALMOST HAD HIM DAMN U"

Angel gave a grin and stuck his toungue out razz "Well,you have as much influence over him as i do but hes a good kid so blah"he said before flying away in joy

[******** a*****e" evil "devil replied before dissapearing in flames

the man ran with flowers in his hand and nearly tripped over a rock before reaching the bench his gf was sitting on and taking a breath before walking over and hugging her from behind"happy anneversry"he said giving her a kiss on the cheek which surprised her before colapesing on the bench

she laughed and said"why are you sweating what happened to the car"

"i ran in to a traffic jam,i got the keys so dont worry"

she hugged him while gigglling"happy anneversery"she said before pulling out an awesome gunblade(sorry i had ta ruin it)and giving it to him

"whoa makes my flowers look like s**t"he replied taking it

"well lets just go home,you can give me something better" xd

they got up and walked away happy the end xd xd xd xd 3nodding 3nodding xd xd xd 3nodding the moral of this story is everything has consequences good r bad hehe c im not an total idiot cool

Crono the lone wolf
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