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Schools here! BIGGER, FATTER AND UGLIER THEN EVER SEEN BEFORE!!!


stineanfreddy
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This is my 3 page story that i wrote...for scool of corse...i'd never have enough time to just make up a story for fun...ENJOY!
comment me, if u like it, or HATE it...(i'll take offense...>_< wink


SuperThinkAbility
Prologue

In Mill Creek, in the year of 2009, the two twins, Holly and Victoria, are currently in Holly’s purple bedroom, on the bed, arguing.

“How come I always have to do everything?” Victoria complained. “Because the only thing I’m good at is making sandwiches. Go refill Freddy’s water and food dish.” I replied. Victoria stood her ground. I stared at my 13 year old sister’s pretty face. Long, black hair, dark brown, glinting eyes, and an irresistible smile. She was kind, adventurous, and generous; perfect character traits. I thought of how I looked: Chinky eyes, short black hair, acne bumps all over my face, and hideous dimples. I’m a pessimist most of the time, and very emotional. Suddenly, I felt the whole house shake. CRACK! The ceiling in my bedroom gave way and came crashing down…
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Cassandra and Toky, the two aliens, went over their plan, (once again) to take over the world. “Do.” Toky explained. (Translation: First, we land on the roof of a human’s house and jump inside to find the residents of the house. Then, we capture them and lock them up in the jail cell of our UFO.) “Suki dadi poop luke full le ah.” Cassandra replied. (Translation: okay.)

Meanwhile, back in Holly’s house, Holly and Victoria scrambled to avoid the falling debris. Their minds set on dodging the wood and plaster, they were completely unaware of the terror and sadness that was about to befall them. All of a sudden, two 13 feet tall, blue aliens, with jet black eyes and perfectly round heads appeared, apparently from out of the sky. The aliens were so shapeless, that you couldn’t tell the arms from the legs or the fingers from the toes. One alien grabbed Holly with its toes (or so it seemed), and the other alien grabbed Victoria. The aliens dragged the two dumbstruck girls into their UFO and locked them up. The UFO was as jumbo as a classroom, and just as colorful.

Victoria sulkily grabbed the jail cell bars and shook them as hard as she could, Holly paced around in the jail cell. Well at least we are in the same jail cell. Holly thought. I wish I was at Grandma’s house. Suddenly, magically, Holly found herself in Grandma’s house. She shivered. It’s cold in here. Maybe Grandma forgot to turn on the heater. “Graaandmaaa!” Holly called. Looking around, she smiled at the cozy memories in this pink flower decorated house. “whaaa-at?” Elly, Holly’s grandma called back, wobbling down the stairs. “Blue aliens came and locked up me and Victoria and then I wished I was here and then I’m here and Victoria isn’t and now I’m scared.” Holly explained quickly.

“How did you get here?”
“Well…I wished I was here…then it happened!”
“Okay…close your eyes and think of a jelly filled, chocolate covered doughnut with a pinch of coconut on top.”
“Okay…”

Two seconds later, a chocolate covered doughnut with some coconut sprinkled on top appeared, right into Elly’s hand. Chewing loudly, Elly said excitedly, “I think you have the same power as me, known as SuperThinkAbility, or STA.”
“You have STA too?”
“Yup. Anyway, let’s think of a way to get rid of those aliens…”
“Ooh! I know! I could wish them to DIE!”
“…No, that would make a HUGE mess…”
“OR…I could just wish them to disappear…”
“Good plan.”
“Okay, bye, grandma Elly!”
“Bye-bye now!”
I wish I was back in the UFO, where I was before, with Victoria.
“—Aah!!! Wahhhh! Wa—Oh! Holly! I missed you!” Victoria cried.
“I missed you too. Now let’s get out of here, quickly.”
I wish this jail cell lock opens. The lock made a POP! sound, then clicked open.
“WHA? How—“
“Tell you later. Let’s get outta here! NOW!”
Victoria scrambled to her feet and ran outside of the UFO, with Holly right at her heels.
Glancing around, Holly spied the two aliens still in the house, one of them holding Freddy, Holly’s beloved Chihuahua, and the other watching SpongeBob on the TV, laughing hysterically. Aliens, BEGONE! Holly thought with fierce energy and rage. First, the alien watching TV disappeared, then the alien holding Freddy disappeared. Freddy immediately fell, and Holly dove frantically, but jumped to late, and Freddy hit the floor, and the hall echoed with Freddy’s whimper, suddenly cut short. Tears streaming down their faces, Victoria and Holly gingerly picked up the limp Freddy, and mourned.
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That same day, a group of scientists developed an anecdote designed to revive dead animals, and make them alive, but the anecdote hadn't been tested yet, so they decided to test their anecdote on the Chihuahua.
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*ding-dong*
It had been 2 hours after Freddy's 'death' and Holly still didn't have the heart to bury Freddy. Putting the dog gently down, Holly sprinted to the front door. Opening the door, she glared at a man, smartly dressed in a suit, standing with four other people, dressed in scientists' robes. The man dressed in the suit handed Holly a piece of paper that read:

CONGRATULATIONS! YOU HAVE BEEN CHOSEN TO WIN TWO MILLION DOLLARS!
1) First, let us examine your dog, and inject an anecdote that will revive your dog
2) Receive a reward of 2 MILLION dollars

Brimming with excitement, Holly agreed and all four scientists piled into Holly’s house and started examining Freddy. 30 minutes later, Holly’s parents came home, and found Holly and Victoria happily chasing Freddy, and piles and piles of $100 dollar bills everywhere. Apparently, they were now, rich.




 
 
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