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Promise
A boy sat trembling in a closet with bruises and bleeding in some places while crying with his hands over his ears,he heard things being turned over as the person he was hiding from gave a laugh as if it was a game

"Little b*****d,where are you hiding"A womans voice said as she laughed more"ill find you"

He then heard footsteps,everyone he heard he would shake even more in fear'W-w-why me,what did i do to deserve this'he thought this before light shot through the room and he was snacthed out and tossed to hit the corner of the wall which made a sickening crack echo through the house as he coughed up blood and looked up to see the woman take a drink of beer then curled up in to a ball

"look at this mess youve made,youve gotten blood on the carpet,WHOS GONNA CLEAN THAT s**t UP HUH"she yelled while kicking the boy once again and broke the bottle over his head

The boy lost conshisness but his eyes were still and some how looking around still in fear but in his unconshis state he was in water sinking to the bottom with a smile on his face that was rare

'God must really hate me'he thought as he continued to fall more before hearing the voice of the woman

"You little s**t,your worthless,all you are is a waste of space,time,and money"she continued beating on his body

He then heard another voice"im coming,just hold on"

"Who are you?"he asked"Just let me sleep,i dont care anymore"

"Why are you giving up,life always gets better you just have to find a way or wait"

The boy opened his eyes to see an exact copy of himself only his eyes were red"who are you"he said barely above a whisper only to see the figure smile and hold his hand out

"Take my hand,and i promise things will get better"the person said

"How about you just take a rest,and leave all of this behind,you dont need all of that pain life only gets worser from here on."Another voice said and he turned to see a shadowey figure standing with its hand out

He looked and began to walk towards the figure"SO YOU JUST GOING TO GIVE UP,I THOUGHT YOU WERE STONGER THAN THAT"the twin said

"Im sorry but its just too hard"the boy said while looking down

"Thats what im for,just take my hand and i promise,I PROMISE THINGS WILL GET BETTER"He then extended his hand"dont you wonder what will happen,its always gonna get worse before getting better,but i promise to you it will get better"

The boy looked to the shadow figure and back to his copy,and turned taking his hand making the shadow yell in anger

"SHUT THE ******** UP b***h"he said before pulling the boy along with him as he swam back to the surface"Now you wait for me,im comeing"

Everything turned black then the boy woke up to see he was still getting the beating and closed his eyes tight'Im trusting you,so hurry,HURRY PLEASE'he yelled in his head before hearing the door being kicked in

"WHAT THE ******** ARE YOU DOING YOU ******** b***h"The person then tackled the woman and beat her before grabibg a peice of the bottle and sliting her throat

All the boy then heard was a gurgle and hard breathing before the person walked over and lifted him off the ground with a smile then put him on a couch

"Are you ok?"

The boy looked up still trembling"I-It's you"

"I told you i would come,all you had to do was wait,now things will get better"he gave a nod and smile before the boy hugged hiim and began to cry

A/N:This was a dream i had about my past mixed with my future,sometimes iwonder what wouldve happened if i wouldve given up,anyway i have ment great people who have made my life better so i thank them for putting up with me when imma assand some o my dumb s**t i do so all i can do is thankyou for being apart o my life^_^

Crono the lone wolf
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  • User Comments: [3]
    Esme Rose
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    Mon Jul 07, 2008 @ 05:56pm


    wow this dream.....very detailed and sad *hugs rly rly rly tight* WE LOVE YOU ANGELLLLLLLLLLL


    -Sleepless Beauty_xty67
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    Wed Jul 09, 2008 @ 02:56am


    Aww Trell That was So Cute! >.<


    Kanashii Clown
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    Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 06:10am


    wow dude well if that was real then im sorry


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