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Where'd I go? Somehow I managed to slip in between the cracks Supposedly important or a priority I haven't shouted for help Because I thought someone would have noticed I was gone Grasping onto these unfamiliar walls I have nothing else to hold on to It's this or fall Deep down to places I've been That I don't want to return to I am convinced that someone will notice Was I not important in the first place? Placing me on a high pedestal They left me to grow dust and look for another depraved person To temporarily idolize I sit on this high deteriorating pedestal Knowing I have nothing And no one but I- the neglected Grasping onto alien walls Crying to myself Praying to God that I don't have to look down I'd hold myself and lose hope But then I'd be holding on to nothing And will surely fall I'm just another trivial weed that fell in between a crack that everyone has walked over The issue that still stands is no one has noticed Not one person

Posted by: Idiosyncratic Quirk Thu Jul 17, 2008 @ 06:53pm

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Sik-EndJ
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Commented on: Thu Jul 17, 2008 @ 06:59pm


	that was deep -snaps finger like a beetnik-

Commented on: Thu Jul 17, 2008 @ 07:09pm

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Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 12:32am

Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 05:12am


	Very well written Gunner. smile You're word choice is scholarly. You need to figure out some way out of this mess though. sad

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Pup Crazed Kiya
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Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 05:36am


	Nice. Quote: Grasping onto these unfamiliar walls I have nothing else to hold on to It's this or fall Quote: - My favorite part

Commented on: Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 03:16am


	awe, that's the deepest I think I've read from you. Very nice gn.

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Commented on: Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 04:03am


	Damn.... very well written! I loved the flow of the words and the imagery in it. Very well done!

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