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The World Is A Concert (WARNING!!This Is Not Depressing) The world is a concert The sun is the spotlight The ground is the stage The trees are the backup dancers The clouds are the many different genres The high mountains are the stars The winds is the music The water ripples from the bass The snow, rain and hail are the confetti And the humans and animals are the audience

Posted by: Raylyn Mizuki Sun Jul 27, 2008 @ 06:33am

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Maaku-Kun
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Sun Jul 27, 2008 @ 11:27pm

*claps*

Very nice. Only line I didn't like the wording of was that mountain one; 'cause, I'd consider stars, like the ones in the sky, something that would be part of the concert as well. That or I don't find mountains that appealing lol. Others were nice, and it's an interesting view of the world. xp

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