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utter randomness from my brain
dumping area for various thoughts, dreams, and other stuff that has fallen out of my head
Poem: Battlefields
swirling mists savagely sip screams
seemingly savoring the succulent sighs
each crackle of crisp cover echoes carelessly
creeping candle flames chuckle at the crust
crust of blood seeping down trees

the forest absorbs anything with agonizing anger
appetizing noises affect the afflicted arms
twitching within the tangle of thorns
tasting the tantalizing treats they
rush towards the retreating refuse of life

feasting faces rise froth from fallen friends
faces filled with blood frothed smiles
eyes with heavy hunger harry the hallowed corpses
devouring the density
desecrating the honorable dead

walls of weeping women wantonly wail
verbally venerating the valiant victors
who savor the satisfying screams that slack their sins
over the odor of opulent orders
care lost children crawl cringingly cross cremations

damaging demons drain delectable dishes
from the blasted bowels of the bloated battlefields
stealing souls seemingly safe from sin
endless evictions of un evil entities enter
the battles of boundless eons ends in endless death

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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 07, 2008 @ 10:10pm
This is my favorite one and is very well done. I would love to see this get published somehow.

commentCommented on: Wed Aug 13, 2008 @ 10:57pm
You are veeery literate.
Go you!!
Haha, I really like this poem.
You are extremely talented lovey :]

Suppah Shaz
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