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The Last Good Fight
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Note: 16's normal thoughts will be in green
16's inner thoughts will be in indigo

Chapter 5, Stolen Helena
"let me go you...you..." Helena screetched as she was chained to a metal wall.
"you what?" the red head asked.
"you stupid fire ring!" Helena shouted.
The fire ring's eyes widened. "how do you know who i am?"
"well, stupid fire ring, i am a time traveler sent to "look" for the sacred prince." helena smartly replied.
"ah, i remember," the fire ring said. "Graceous Virtu i presume?"
Helena smiled and nodded.
"well then now that i know your name, mine is Fira,"

16 relaxed his thoughts. His mind was going crazy from all the thought battles he's been having with something he never knew about.
"16? 16?" Ame asked.
"hmm? oh, yea?"
"tis seems different than thou usual self."
"i do? i don't see it."

16 you are making this so much more fun
what do you mean?
lying to her even though you want to tell her the true
i, i don't know what you're talking about
course you don't, your mind is causing you to not want to know what you want to know
that's not true, who are you anyway?
i'm...well there's no fun in telling you now so i'll be 17
fine, 17, what would you want me to do about Helena?
leave her, she's never been that useful to you anyway
never! you're wrong, she's been a great friend since ever!
leave her
leave her
leave her
leave her
leave her
leave her
leave her
leave her...

"shut up!" 16 shouted, not knowing he was in reality now.
"16?" Ame asked.
"o, um, yes?"
"something has been wrong with thee, care to evaluate?"
16 shook his head.

good boy, keep it up
16 held his head and pounded his hand against it. "tis 16! what has beseeched thee to do this!"
"n-nothing, n-nothing at all."

go on, keep lying
16 cringed he had enough. "gah!" He banged his head against the door.
"16!! Stop this foolish punishment!"

"well, Fira, i'ma call some timecops and atack you in your sleep! try and kidnap me now!"
"i have you already,"
Helena slowly nodded and looked at her surroundings. A green painted room, chains on the walls, a red headed fire ring infront, helena sitting on the floor, and some bugs on it as well.
"why do you want me?"
"i dont want you i want...the sacred prince." Fira struggled to say.
helena sparked an idea.
"you knew the sacred prince right?"
Fira's eyes widened. "n-no,"
"you loved him,"
"no!"
"yet you couldn't get your hands on him because he was going to be engaged."
"no! no! no!"
"and that fiance would be, Ame."
"she, she ruined my life," Fira walked around. "she always had to be miss perfect, yet she didn't try to be this she was naturally this!"
"you just had to get so angry that it angered the other fire rings, causing it not to be safe for the sacred prince to be in the imortal lands so he was sent somewhere else."
"that ruined my life! i couldn't see him again! Never!"
"you needed to see him and just when Number One had a mission for any fire ring to kill Ame you just had to take it."
"how else would i see him? Yet, i don't know what he looks like, his appearance has changed just for that time!"
"it's alright, i understand, just let me go and i'll help you."
"no! if i have you then Ame would surely come for you, then i can kill her!"
"how would they know where we are?"
Fira didn't think that through. "wait here, i'll lead them here..."

16's head was bruised, scratched, and bleeding a little.

tisk tisk 16,
what?
punishing yourself? just because you think you've gone crazy? what would your little angel think of you now?
leave her out of this!
why? she's clearly involved
leave her alone
ha, like i could, remember i'm in your body
i'll seal you away
how? little 16?
i don't know 17...
well then, let me deal with your little sunshine...
as Ame was fizxing 16's head 16 grabbed Ame's throat, choaking her.
"1-16, w-what has beseeched you to d-do this to thy self?" Ame struggled out.
He increased his grip over her throat.

aw little 16, don't you get it? you can never run from your dark side.





User Comments: [2]
xXFalling_RedXx
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comment Commented on: Sat Nov 01, 2008 @ 05:36pm
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
I NEED TO CONTINUE!!!


comment Commented on: Wed Dec 17, 2008 @ 02:06am
whoa nelia you wrote alot more than all mine put together! (just for this one entry too!)



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