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HOLA!!!
YOU READ THIS I KILL YOU!!!
Just a rough draft....Wrote it in maybe 7 minutes
Edmund stared out the window, the sound of war all around. Peter ran into the room and yanked him away from the mesmerizing sight.
"Come on you idiot!" He screamed.
Edmund followed him out the door, heading towards the shelter. They got inside and Susan and their mother greeted them, happy they were safe. Nobody else realized it, but Edmund noticed right away.
"Where's Lucy?"
Susan and Peter looked at each other with confused expressions.
"I thought you got her!" They both said at the same time.
It seemed like the time has paused. Even the war sounds were silent for a few seconds. Then Edmund ran back towards the house. Peter started to run after him but his mom stopped him.
"Let him go. He'll get Lucy."
Peter balled his hands into fists, but he sat down on a bed. After two minutes he jumped back up again.
"That idiot probably got himself killed!"
Just then, Edmund and Lucy ran in. Susan closed the door after them, and hugged them both. Their mother soon joined in and tears of relief ran down her face. Peter yanked Edmund out of the group hug and shook him.
"Why'd you have to be the hero! You could have gotten both of you killed!"
Tears welled up in Edmund's eyes. Even when he did the right thing, Peter always found something wrong with it.
"Peter stop!"
Susan pulled the two apart, and glared at Peter while Lucy gave Edmund a tight hug. She was crying, and Edmund instantly forgot his problems and tried to comfort her.
People pushed against the Pevensies as they said their goodbyes to their mother. She went to each one and gave them a kiss on the cheek. Peter started towards the train, and Susan and Lucy followed close behind. Edmund started to follow, but his mom stopped him.
"Ed?"
He stopped and looked at her, trying to hold back the tears that wanted to come pooring out.
"Try to keep them together."
Edmund nodded and ran to catch up with his brother and sisters. Peter looked back at him and scowled.
"Try to keep up."
Edmund just nodded, not looking at Peter. Lucy grabbed Edmund's hand and smiled at him. He smiled back, and lef her towards the train, and away from their home.
Lucy sat under a tree in the backyard of her new home. She watched as Susan, Peter, and Edmund tried to play cricket. Edmund threw the ball at Peter, and he hit it as hard as he could. It slammed into a window with a loud crash. They all ran to where the ball landed inside. When they saw the broken window and the armor that was knocked over they knew they were in big trouble.
"That was a horrible throw! I wouldn't have hit the window if someone else had throw that ball!"
Edmund opened his mouth to say something when he heard someone heading towards them.
"Run!"
They ran as fast as they could, twisting through hallways and going up and down different staircases, trying every door on the way. Lucy finally found one that was unlocked.
"Over here!"
She opened the door and Susan, Peter, and Edmund followed her in. All that was in it was a wardrobe, but it was a hiding place. They all crammed into it, heading as far back as possible.
"How big is this wardrobe? It didn't seem this big on the outside."
"Susan be quiet!" Lucy whispered.
Edmund, who has gotten into the wardrobe first, took a few more steps backward, and then he felt rock instead of the wooden floor of the wardrobe. He turned around and his mouth dropped open. Lucy, Peter, and Susan followed suit.
"Impossible!" Susan whispered.
Lucy grinned at Edmund, and grabbed his hand. She tugged him out of the cave they had stepped into, and led him out onto the beach that stretched as far as they could see. They ran into the water and started splashing around. After gawking a bit more Susan joined them. Peter turned around, and found nothing but empty air. He searched for a way back into the wardrobe, but he couldn't find one. His face turned red, and he stomped after his family. He grabbed Edmund by the collar of his shirt.
"What have you gotten us into?" He screamed.
Edmund gulped. Susan put her hand on Peter's shoulder and he looked at her. She nodded, and let Edmund go. He shrugged Susan's hand off his shoulder and sat down on the sand.
"We should explore." Lucy suggested.
Susan nodded and Peter stood up, shooting Edmund a mean look.
"We might as well since we're stuck here."
Edmund tried to avoid Peter's look by looking up. He saw the ruins of an old castle on a hill, and pointed to it.
"We should go there."
Lucy nodded and started running towards it. Peter, Susan, and Edmund ran after her. They spent an hour exploring ruins. Susan went up to Edmund and Peter.
"I think this castle was attacked."
Edmund looked around, and tried to picture a castle getting attacked.
"Look over here!" Lucy yelled.
They ran towards her, and saw her looking at a wall.
"It's just a wall Lucy." Peter said, rolling his eyes.
"No, it slides back! See?" She pushed on it with all of her might and it moved a tiny bit.
Peter sighed, but just to get Lucy to be quiet, he pushed on the wall. To his surprise, it slide open, and revealed a wooden door. Peter opened it, and they walked inside. They walked down a staircase and opened a gate, that led to a big room with four chests in it. They each went to a chest and opened it. Inside were clothes, weapons, and other odds and ends.
"These clothes are weird!" Lucy exclaimed, holding up a long red dress.
"Maybe we should wear these clothes. So we, fit in." Susan suggested, her gaze landing on a pretty green dress.
Peter nodded, and they each pulled out an outfit, then got changed.
"You guys look funny!" Lucy giggled.
"So do you!" Edmund shot back, smiling.
Susan inspected her dress, and Peter rummaged through the chest he found his new clothes in. At the bottom, he found a sword and a shield. He pulled them out, and inspected them. They were in prefect condition. He put the shield on his back and the sword around his waist.
"What are you doing?" Susan asked.
"We might need protection."
Susan, Edmund, and Lucy each went to 'their' chests. Susan pulled out a bow and a quiver of arrows, and Edmund found a sword and shield. Lucy found a small dagger, and a bottle. It wasn't like anything else in the chest.
"What's this?" She asked.
Edmund shrugged.
"Take it with, maybe we'll find out."
Lucy grinned and nodded.
 hup123hup123slapslap · Sat Dec 27, 2008 @ 07:12pm · 0 Comments |
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