page 2 of my fanfic
(still part one though)

{Winry then came in from the front door}

Winry: Hi guys!
Alphonse: Winry!
Edward: oh hey Winry......
Winry: hope i wasent inturpting anything! *she smiled*
Edward: nah...
Alphonse: of course not Winry!*he smiled*
Winry: oh!
{winry then walks over to Ed and hands him a paper bag filled with things she got from the markey}

Winry: I thought maybe you were a little busy..So i got youa few things from the market!
Edward: oh.....thanks Winry *he had a small smile on his face*

{Ed then went to put the food up}

Winry: oh hey Ed........do you mind if I go an see how Al is?
Edward: sure......I bet he'd be glad to have some company
Winry: ok then thank you Ed

{winry then walked over to Alphonse's bed}

Winry: hey Al!
Alphonse: hi Winry how are you?*he smiled*
Winry: good good,well how are you doing?

{Alphonse was silent for a moment}

Alphonse: well......Im...........the same.......
Winry: oh......well I'm sure you'll get better-
Alphonse: I hate being sick!
Winry: huh?
Alphonse: brother works so hard to study...........and all I do..........is keep him from it...............I make brother have to take care of me..........
Winry: oh Al...Im sure Ed dosent mind......if he did belive me you'd know*she giggled a little*
Alphonse: I guess.....*had a sad look*
Winry: well I have to go now,gotta get back to my automail
Edward: you and automail geez......
Winry: well Ed automail is important to those that need it
Edward: yeah yeah,well take care Winry!
Winry: You too!
Alphonse: brother.....I hope you can forgive me.............

[ the next morning]
{Ed was in his bed asleep and dreaming}

Edward: *snores* yay........Winry......your awsome.......you brought.....pie..........awsome....its apple pie!*snores* oh Winry............you know me so well.................*snores* no Winry...........its my cookie!.........*snore*

{Al was standing up watching Ed}

Alphonse: e-heheheh come on brother wake up*nudges Ed a little*
Edward: WHO WHAT HUH?! oh..........damn I was sleeping so good*rubs his head* AL! YOUR-YOUR UP?!HOW?!
Alphonse: I have just been feeling alot better today all of a sudden*he smiled*
Edward: really?!*he smiled*
Alphonse: mm-hmm*he shook his head* but Ed I've decided..........since I'm better today-
Edward: uh-huh-
Alphonse: I wanna help you bring mom back!
Edward: Al.........ok then!

{they walk into a room}
{Ed turned a light switch on}
{Ed then started drawing a transmutation cicrle}

Edward:are you sure your ready for this Al?
Alphonse: mm-hmm!
Edward: ok then.........well there is no turning back now..........e-heh*rubs his head*
Alphonse: yeah..........Ed I'm kinda nervous.......e-heh
Edward: me too...........well here it goes.....

{they go to put their hands on the transmutation circle}
{then suddenly Alphonse starts coughing up puddles and puddles of blood}

Alphonse: br-brother!*cough**cough* help!*cough*
Edward: AL!

{Ed then rused over to Al,he then got his shirt stained with blood from Al}

Edward: AL!

{Winry was on her way to visit again and heard Ed screaming}

Winry: Ed whats wrong?! *sees Al*WHAT HAPPENED?!
Edward: Al he- started coughing.........
Winry: Lets get him to the hospital!
Edward: right.....dont worry Al....were gonna help ok *started cring*
Alphonse:......................br............o.....ther............

{they got to the hospital}
{Ed,Winry and Pinako waited for the Doctor to tell them what was wrong}
{Edward was covered in Al's blood and had his face buried in his hands cring}

Edward: Its all my fault! all of it!!! please Al!!! I'm so sorry!!!
Winry: Edward its alright everything's gonna be ok-
Edward: NO ITS NOT! ITS MY FAULT AL IS LIKE THIS!!! I FORCED HIM!!!ITS MY FAULT AND I'M WHO TO BLAME!! I-
Pinako: WHAT KIND OF TALK IS THAT HUH!? DO YOU HEAR YOURSELF RIGHT NOW?!.........just calm down Edward.......wanted to beat yourself up never solves or helps anything..........so try your best to calm down ok

Doctor: sigh..........
Edward: DOCTOR DOCTOR!! HOW IS HE?! please tell me he's gonna be ok!!!
Doctor: I'm sorry Edward but then I'd be lying to you......
Edward: LYING WHAT DO YOU MEAN?! dont......dont tell me he's..........
Doctor: I'm sorry..........but you see his body has been fighting this illness for so long.......it couldnt take it anymore........so I guess it just gave up fighting the illness anymore.........trulely its a miracle he survived this long.........
Winry: no that cant be true....
Pinako: you cant be serious.............
Edward: NO!

{Ed's face was struck with both shock and sadness}
{Ed then busted thourgh the doors into Al's room,Winry then followed him}

Edward: its not true..............its not!..........it cant be..........damnit it just cant....................

{Al then tied to lean his head towards Ed's direction,his mouth and hands were stained with blood,and so was the bed and floor}
{Al also had a sad and pale expersion,his eyes were almost blank}

Alphonse: Ed...........
Edward: Al..............DAMNIT NO!!! I WONT LET IT!! I CANT LOSE YOU!!!! YOUR ALL I HAVE AL!!!

{Ed then rushed over to Al's bed covered bed}

Edward: please Al........please bear with me! please!!!!

{Al didnt answer}

Edward: were all we have! we cant leave each other!!! damnit!! please Al dont you dare die!!

{Ed squeazed Al's hand,Ed's face was covered with tears}

Edward: take me instead if someone has to die.......
Alphonse: brother......................you...........should be...........happy.........im going to...............die.......right?
Edward: WHAT?! WHY SHOULD I?!
Alphonse: because................you wont........have..........to take........care of.........me..........and you.............can.......have mom..back.........without me messing........it up *he tried to smile*
Edward: what?..........NO AL I DONT CARE ABOUT THAT!!!! I DONT WANT YOU TO DIE!!!!! DONT DIE!!!PLEASE!!!!

{Al just smiled as he started to close his eyes}
{Edward noticed Al closing his eyes}

Edward: no.......NO!!! DONT YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!!!
Alphonse: I............wont be...........here much longer.............brother........................I'm sorry................for everything.........I'll miss you.................brother...............I-
Edward: GOD DAMNIT!!! NO!!! DONT GO!!!

{Al's eyes completely closed}

Edward: ALPHONSE!!!!

[later that same day]
{Ed and Winry were at the funeral}

Winry: well I guess the good thing about it.......is at least Al gets to see your mother again..........
Edward: why........why did he have to go...............

{edward was still cring}

Winry: Ed........theres nothing you can do..........
Edward: he was sorry...................but for what?...........I'm the one's who should be sorry...........I'm the one who desevres to die............
Winry: Ed..................dont be that way.......Al wouldnt want you to be...........
Edward: Im sorry Alphonse!
Winry: *she pats Ed on the back* well I have to go............will you be ok?

{Edward was focused on Al's gravestone}

Edward: who knows..............
Winry: please take care Ed....................



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