page 3(its still part one though)


[2 weeks later]

Edward: I cant live like this!! It was hard enough with out mom..........but.........without Al...............its................I want him back! he was all i had............maybe if i work and study a bit harder..........i could pull it off..................so I've decided.......I'm bringing him back..............

{lightning strikes past the window}
{on the phone}
Izumi: oh why hello Edward what a surprizing call.....
Edward: e-heh oh hey teacher can I ask you something.....
Izumi: go right ahead then.....

[the next day]
{Ed is packing things into a bag}

Winry: what do you mean your going to study with your teacher again?
Edward: exactly what I meant.........
Winry: Edward..........whats going on?why would you go and study with your teacher again all of a sudden........what are you planing..........

{Ed was silent}

Winry: your planing on bringing Alphonse back to life...............arent you?
Edward:......................I have to go

{finishes packing and starts to leave}

Winry: Ed........just be careful.............
Edward: you bet..................

{Edward walks past the grave yard as he walks to the train station,he then stops by Al's grave}

Edward: Alphonse............yeah It's me again...........

{sits on the ground}

Edward: well I'm gonna go and study with Teacher again...............e-heh...........Al I promise I wont give up until your back again!! I'll study extra hard ok!! cause..........thats just what you mean to me ok..........so when I dont be sorry ok...........

{Ed then smiled and wipe his face with his sleeve}

Edward: bye Al.........when I come back,we'll be a family again.....just like before

{Ed then contiues to the train station,but before he left he picked a flower near the grave yard and placed it on Al's grave}
[a year later]
{it was raining}

Winry: Hey Al its me Winry,yep its time to visit again heheh *she smiled* I'm visiting extra for Ed too heheh,your brother really misses you Al,I do too

{she places a flowers on grave}

Winry:arent they pretty Al? hehe I picked them myself,I thought you might like them

[meanwhile]
{Edward returned home and was in the basement prepareing}

Edward: ok that should be it............If what I learned is correct this should be the perfect ingerdients for the body.................but for the soul........well I'll just have to cross that bridge myself.............*he cuts his finger* my blood................for his soul........that should be a good enough price right?..........this should do it............I should see Al real soon................Al I promised,just as I said.....

{he started cring and he smiled a bit as he went to activate the circle}
{Lightning struck past the house}
[meanwhile outside]

Envy: what a perfect sound it is to wittness a human suffering,well I see I was right to have come sfter all..........

Winry: man what a storm........
Edward:.........uh........what happe- WHAT HAPPENED TO MY ARM AND MY FREAKIN LEG?!?

{Edward then started to cough blood}

Edward: what?..........Im coughing blood........like-like teacher? why?! oww! *grabs onto his stomach* WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO ME I- thats right.......AL?! AL?!

Unknown: b.........ro.................th.............er.......................
Edward: Al- Al is that you?
Unknown: E.........dw.........ard.................br............o............th.............er...............

{Ed then smiled tring to look though the fog to see what was calling for him thinking it was Al}

Edward: Did I do it?! did I bring you back Al?! *smiling* ........Al? *gasp* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

{Edward then saw what was calling him,but it wasent Al,it was a mishapen creature that wasent even human,Winry then heard Ed scream}

Winry: well AL i have to go- WHAT THAT SOUNDED LIKE ED! sorry Al I have to make this visit short,forgive me.........

{Winry then rushed to Ed's aid,she wasent able to see what Ed saw because of the fog}

Winry: ED! there you are!

{she tried to lift him up yet she felt blood and felt he was missing his arm and leg}

Winry: WHAT THE HELL?!? WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU!!! our arm and leg are missing!!
Edward:YEAH I NOTICED!! *coughes up more blood*
Winry: well this is no time to be smart! I have to hel your going to bleed to death if I dont!!! but what happened!!!
Unknown:............W...............i.............n.........ry...............
Winry: What the-......that.....that sounded like-like Al.............
Edward: dont look Winry..........it isnt human!
Winry: what are you talking abo- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

[meanwhile outside]

Lust: my my our Master was right
Gluttony: right right right!
Lust: so a new homunculus really has been born..........and on such a horrorible day like this too,well we didnt waste our time coming then humph.....
Gluttnony: Lust.....Im hungrey *stomach growls*



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