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My Poem's
This is some of my poem's that i have posted, i write all the time but not all my stuff is good enough to post, this is just some of my better poem's the one's that i like, i hope you like them to but it is okay if you don't, i fully understand
My Immortal Life
Nowhere to run, Nowhere to hide
My whole life is a lie and i'm completely dead inside


Nothing is enough, Nothing ever will be
Living this life of unpleasing pleasure is killing me
(killing me inside)



I want it all but you say that's silly
You just don't understand all the pressure, all the pain
It's killing me
(killing me inside)


It takes so much patients, so much time
Sometimes i just wish i was dead, yeah i wish i could die
I just wish i could escape this immortal life
You say it's a gift
You say "live with it" but that's just it
All this living is what's got me so damn crazy
It's killing me
(killing me inside)


It take's so much courage, so much strength
Sometimes i just wish i was weak, yeah i wish i couldn't do it
I just wish i could walk away from this immortal life
You say that's crazy
You say "you don't know what you've got and you don't deserve it" well i don't want it
I think that i'm going insane
Somebody kill me
(kill me please)


My soul is tainted with pain and despair
You don't even care
Your under a spell, i'm under a curse
It's so much worse then you could ever imagine
It's killing me
(killing me inside)...






User Comments: [2]
iKimmie-Kynz
Community Member





Fri Jul 17, 2009 @ 04:25am


Whoa..
That's deep.
o;
If I knew the beat, I could probably sing it.
((Wants to be either a singer, writer, artist, or actress.))
<3.


Hiraru Sagara
Community Member





Mon Jul 20, 2009 @ 10:22pm


... This is what 'real' Vampires and Werewolves feel... It's great... But looking at it as someone whose taken English Comp. You need to do a little bit of grammar. Talk through it and any time you want to pause put a comma, period, or some sort of punctuation. That's the first thing we learn about Poetry.

sweatdrop I do like it, but I want to help you improve too, so don't take it too hard.


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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