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My Poem's
This is some of my poem's that i have posted, i write all the time but not all my stuff is good enough to post, this is just some of my better poem's the one's that i like, i hope you like them to but it is okay if you don't, i fully understand
Scarlet Red
Like the angel you are
You laugh creating a lightness in my chest
Your eye's
They penetrate me
it never cease's to amaze me
I always knew that in the end
I would lose you
You were so tour up and there was nothing i could do
I wanted to help but you wouldn't let me in
I tied to pretend it all work out
Now there is scarlet red all over the bed
These images play all over again in my head
I can't get you outta my thought's or my mind
Yeah i'm thinking about you all the time
And even now i wonder why
I don't understand i am so confused
i don't know why i ever tried
Cause i always lose
And like the angel you are
you try to comfort me
But there is no use trying
Can't you see
You are the one who did this to me
Cause now there is scarlet red all over the bed
These images play all over again in my head
I'm thinking about all the good time's that we shared
But when i do
The bad come's to my mind
I just wish we could have had more time
And even now i wonder why
Why did this have to end
Scarlet red is the color of love
I try to pretend that is all this was
I tell myself that one day you will return to me
But that's not the case and now i see that
The scarlet red all over the bed
Is just as real as the bullet in you head
You are dead and so is my heart
It's like your at the finish line and i am stuck at start






User Comments: [2]
iKimmie-Kynz
Community Member





Sun Jul 19, 2009 @ 10:40pm


This is really good!
You should make this one into a song.
O:
<3.


Hiraru Sagara
Community Member





Mon Jul 20, 2009 @ 10:04pm


crying cry Please tell me you didn't come home to find a loved one had killed himself... This is just so sad... and has great imagery... It's a little long, but I do like it.


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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