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Days of Past Melodies
Days of Past Melodies

Bring me back my heart,
Bring me back my love.
I want my heart back, clean of any thing from you.
How can I move on when you still have it?
Bring me back my trust,
Bring me back my joy.
How can I give those to others when you still have them?
How can I look forward when your still pulling me back.
Days have gone by, weeks have gone by, now a month.
Its time to move on, I want what I gave you back,
You never wanted them nor did you take care of them.
Give me back my heart,
Give me back my love.

You'll never have them back.






User Comments: [2]
Foxless
Community Member





Tue Dec 15, 2009 @ 11:58pm


oh wow this is my favorite poem..you manipulate the words verry good lol


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 08:17pm


I love how deep this poem is. The words really got to me.
However, free verse isn't really my cup of tea, so I'm just gonna end this comment here. Keep writing! ^^


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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