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Letters to Him
Letters to Him

These feelings are still deep in my heart.
You think that I could put it all behind me.
I've tried, I've tried, to get you out my mind.
But I cant, its not easy.
There still a lot of feelings flying around.
Wish there was something I could do. I'm lost and confused.
I've tried, I've tried, to get you out my mind.
I tried to erase these feelings,
Its not easier the second time around.
I still smile when I hear your name,
My heart still jumps when I see your face,
There's somethings a girl cant forget.
I've tried, I've tried, to get you out my mind.
Still hope to see you soon,

P.S.
I'm not over you.






User Comments: [2]
Foxless
Community Member





Tue Dec 15, 2009 @ 06:38pm


wow this ones really interesting i like the ending very creative of you i wasnt expecting that to be said i was just thinking it really cool


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 08:41pm


Aww! So sweet! This poem nearly made me cry. I loved the meter to bits; it slid right off the tongue. It had quite a few imperfect rhymes, and that made me really happy.
...Wonderful ending. AGAIN. Keep writing!


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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