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Holyhobbitshitt
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My poems
ello, since yhu entered this journal im assuming yhu want to read my poems,
Well heres the first one Please comment and tell me waht yhu think !


1."Freedom"
Freedom i await
Shackled in chains is now
I dont want to be in chains
no longer
Im going to go mad if i do
I scream and cry and plead for mercy
i yell "let me go"
But im still chained
and never will be set free



i hope yhu liked that one.. Now heres my next poem calld well.. there is no title to this one..
here it is


2.People say "i understand your pain and misery i also feel the same" No,no you dont have no clue the pain i feel deep in my heart and soul
if you saw the pain in my heart you would have thought it was a nightmare that never ends... you will never wake up.. Not able to run away,It always catches up
and hits you when yhu least expect it and when your unprepaired...



I hope yhu liked that one also..
Here is the next one its short but it says alot..

3. "Love"
Love is something everyone has
You may know yhu have it
Know its coming.
But may never recieve it


Yeah i know super short but if yhu read the words it says alot..
Okay i'll post the fourth and fifth one and then i'll post more later okay?



4. "So many "
Worthless & Pathetic
Misery & Pain
sadness & depression
death & despare
You'll never know the way they feel
But i do
This is what i feel
and i cant change it



5. The way it feels "
Sadness & Depression
Fill my heart & soul
When i cut my wrist
And see the blood come out
i feel differnet
i love the way the pain feels
the knife ripping my skin
cutting it open
Blood comes out slowly
As it drips on the floor in front of me




Well
thats all my poems i hope yhu like them i have more poems but ima post them at sepreate times and sepreat plaaces
Please comment on them and tell me waht yhu think
I would like it if yhu comment
I hope yhu like the way i expressd my feelings into
words and put them together and made a poem
(:





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Holyhobbitshitt
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comment Commented on: Thu Sep 09, 2010 @ 10:57pm
Comment My Poems Please !


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